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Italibaso


Hi, everpony. I'm a dutch brony who tries his best to write good stories just for fun

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The finals of the School of Friendship are on the way and the Young Six are doing whatever they can to prepare for it. A few days before the finals they encounter a young pony named Cosette, who quickly seems to befriend the Young Six. But things start to take a turn for the worse after Gallus makes the decision to visit the Castle of the Two Sisters along with his friends and the young pony.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 186 )

Well this is pretty interesting story so far I'm always intrested to the young six keep up the good work

Very interesting so far, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

This will be an immensely interesting story I feel like

*looks at tags * *reads story * Suspicion dial turned to 11

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And it's only going to more interesting from here on out. At least in my opinion

Hey your story said its been updated but its not is it a glitch

Comment posted by Italibaso deleted Jun 15th, 2020

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I'm sorry. I accidently pushed the publish button before the next chapter was finished. But I can at least say it's almost done

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Oh ok no problem Again take your time

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Don't worry, it's finished now. For real this time XD

Hmm Something suspicious about that girl Cosette I didn't like the way what she did in the end but it's too soon but she is up to something and whatever that dark crystal that could be the same thing that happened back in that episode the crystal Empire that shows you your deepest fear ohh This is pretty interesting so far and whatever gallus saw must be really bad The story is really interesting so far and I do like to see what it's gonna happen keep up the good work 😉

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Thanks! I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far ^^

Sorry, everyone. I accidently pushed the publish button again before chapter 3 was finished. I guess That's what happens when It's so close to the edit button

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Let me guess, you typed it on phone or tablet. Don't worry, it happened to me before

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Yup, I did. And thanks XD

Oops It happened again 😅

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Yeah, sorry. I really should stop writing on my phone XD

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That's OK accidents happen 😊 :derpyderp1:

By the way Sorry I have to do this but I had to go for this reference of your title lol

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Hahaha! Yeah. That reference was 100% intentional on my part XD

Sorry to be asking about this but when dose a new story comes out

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You mean a new chapter or a completely new story?

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I'm gonna try to make sure it will be finished before next week, I hope

I KNOW IT I KNOW THERES SOMETHING WRONG ABOUT THAT PONY SHE EVIL but what the heck she wants With those artifacts but something tells me it's not good at all and oh boy gallus he's going to get the blame for this I'm nervous and excited at the same time whats going to happen next keep up the good work man.

''It's not like that.'' Gallus quickly said in a desperate tone, ''Listen. If I don't do this, I might never see my friends again. They are the closest thing to a family I've ever have.''

Awwww gallus 😢 I feel so bad for him

A sinister smile slowly began to form on Cosette's face as she lit up her horn, ''Sleep.'' She said in a completely different sounding voice before she shot a magic beam at Gallus's forehead.

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Thanks! I'm going to keep up the good work for sure ^-^

Hmm I feel like I know who's that pony is but I don't wanna spoil it and I don't want to Assume yet ether because it's a little too early of the story So I'm gonna hold that theory for later But again as I said before this is very excited And very nervous 😅

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Hehe, you'll find out soon enough if your theory is correct or not :)

Uh oh looks like gallus is going to get the blame for what Cosette evil deed but what is she up too and why dose she need those Artifacts what is the Mystery of those dark crystals how will gallus will get out of this situation I guess we'll find out next time

And yeah I'm using this music from dragon ball z to be counted music lol 😆

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Lol, great reference right there, pal! XD

Sorry to ask but when does your new chapter comes out

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I'll try my best to finish it before monday

Oh dear gallus Lost his memory that's kind of said and he doesn't even know he has friends at least not this many poor kid I wonder how they're gonna get his memory back And not only that the tree of harmony looks like it's being corrupt it because of an unknown dark crystal What is Cosette whats with those artifacts she has Something to do with this Situation But whatever it is I hope the others figure it out soon And stop her I guess we'll find out the next time

I did it again lol 😆 You should use this 😅

For some reason, Gallus almost felt like he was about to shed a tear as all of his friends were hugging him. He could have sworn that he felt something like this before. A few seconds later they all finally let go of their hug and headed towards the Library.

Omg gallus My heart goes out to you man 😭

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Lol, are you gonna do a 'Next time on' With every new chapter I release? XD

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Don't know really do you mind it?

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No, not at all. I really like it. That's why I asked ^^

I hope that doesn't really annoyed you too much for asking But when do you usually post your story

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I'm gonna do my best to release at least one chapter every 2 weeks. This next one might take slightly longer

''Woohoo!'' Silverstream shouted as she jumped in the air, ''I did it! I passed my test!'' Silverstream said to herself before she headed into one of the tunnels, hoping that it would lead back towards the exit.

Yes you did silverstream that was amazing girl

''Name's Gilda,' The griffin said, ''And you are nothing but a filthy, little street rat in case you needed a reminder of that too.''

''A street rat?'' Gallus said, looking confused at Gilda.

''Did I really do all of that?'' Gilda said back in a mocking tone, ''Stop being in denial, Gallus. Everygriff here knows that you are a worthless street rat. You started your life as a street rat, your life will end as a street rat. And only parasprites would morn you.''

Oh my god poor gallus

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