This is just wrong.
G-Guys... Something is SERIOUSLY wrong with wherever I just stepped into...
Look, it's just too strangely peaceful here. Peaceful to the point of being suspicious. It looks normal, but I can FEEL that something is wrong...
Let me clear things up, okay?
So, this place is Ponyville, but is literally ONLY Ponyville. It's like that human game, uh... Silent something? I don't know. But whenever I try walking away from Ponyville, I'm immediately thrown back to it. I'm on the outskirts and I don't think anypony's seen me yet...
Wait... are those... I just saw two bipedal... those are humans, right? Man, they look so weird... I should warn them... uh oh.
I think they saw me. They're just staring at me, not moving.
"Uh... hello! Don't know who you two are, but..."
Oh BUCK they're starting to run after me, I gotta run!
Oh Celestia help m-OOF!
Ack! How are humans so fast! And why isn't my superspeed working!
"Let go of me, you stupid bucking human things!!!!!"
"Not until you tell us where we are and how to get out of here."
"I don't know, I just got here myself, okay!"
Uh... why did the humans freeze like that? And why is there... wait...
TWILIGHT?!
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The only problem I currently have is with how the sequel loop makes it hard for me to tell what story is first any one mind helping?
Not the Twilight you're thinking of, Mena. Not even a pony, if memory serves me right. Best case scenario, between your Grimdark heritage, world-traveling capabilities, and the two humans to get her attention, she won't bother you, and you can just focus on getting out. Otherwise, seek out this world's Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo/Bright Eyes/whatever that mailmare is called here.
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This story is first, read it right up to GOC Field Base, then to The Black Moon Howls, then Disharmony: Genesis, than back here. The ???? chapters are side things.
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Midnight is correct.