nice work.

9410723
Thanks
I'd love to hear what you like about it
If anything stood out to you

9411033
well the futa and they nearly come in porn I like to collect those type of pics off the internet.

You’re putting out a lot of top quality stuff, really digging the panty stuff going on in this fic. Would love to see some extra focus on the clothing in the future of this fic, but that’s just me haha. Great work!! Very hot

9411440
Hey, I really appreciate that
This was super fun to write and there's great stuff to come
I'm also way into clothing but it can be tough to focus on without visuals
I'd recommend my story Hidden Intentions
It gets a little more clothing intensive than this story will

9411669
Yup I've read that one too, but the focus was a bit more on shorts iirc. Still an amazing story too, but your focus on panties and skirts in this one really does it for me, amazing work!

9412612
Thanks I'll see if I can't push the panties and skirts even harder
I'm basically always looking for more effective ways to involve clothes in my writing
You'll have to let me know how my panty game holds up going forward

9412729
Wow, sounds like a job for me! Youre already doing great so im sure itll turn out amazing.

Normally I'm not a huge fan of futa clopfics, but I'll let this one slide.
If Will Smith was reading this, he would agree that this is hot.

9414296
What a strange way to put it
But thank you, I appreciate it
In what ways did mine stand apart from other futa?
I'd love to hear what you liked about it

9414378
Partly because that it was EqG and I'm more lenient on that, and that it was hot as hell.

9411440
Sounds like a fun time. I haven't gotten to reading that part yet, but I'll probably get around to doing so tonight

One thing here, peak is to reach an apex and peek is to look cautiously. You used peaked up there instead of peeked.

Otherwise, goddamn creampies are my fetish. If I could just get a shitload of irl futa creampies and not that fake ass dildo under the panties shit that Japan has my life would be perfect. More.

9420556
Hey, thanks for the correction, I do that a lot

Also, yea, I feel you.
In general, I wish there was better quality futa/intersex porn out there
But it's basically all bad

But hey, stick around for the ongoing story
I plan to include creampies at least a couple more times

9420575
Yesssss.... Goooooood....

And hey, I feel ya. The homonyms get lotsa people. Outside of those that I've seen, it's really well put together.

This was cute but sad too because hard as you try friends from high school rarely last (face book don't count) but that's just my experience still great story

9681176
Most Highschool friends don't turn into magical girls and blast evil magic from a horse dimension together.