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Cipher800


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Equestria has faced many threats, ranging from reality-warping draconeqqui to magic-stealing centaurs and the like. But Equestria has never faced the wrath of a god. Celestia, Luna, Discord, they may seem like gods to the populace, but not even the Tree can compare to a millionth of this guy's power.

He looked upon them and deemed them "racist" and "corrupt" nature-abusers before casting his judgement upon all of Equestria, and it is up to none other than Twilight herself to prove pony kind is innocent and convince him to spare them.

Fortunately, she is not alone in this. Both Twilight and Spike will find dark secrets that will change their outlook on how the world works, the history of ponykind way past the events of Hearth's Warming, and even something about Twilight's old mentor and the royal family.

One thing's for certain, things will never be the same after this.

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is that master hand

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No, not really. Supposed to be the hands of the god while the Ultra Necrozma light is supposed to be his head.

God? Or Blasphemy

These are the questions, that was on my mind when i read the title

I did not like it, it was kind of done with little creativity in my opinion, yes Celestia certainly has several secrets and she would make a good villain of the type `` I manipulated the story in my favor``, but only a cosmic entity arrive, and then to play in each of the twilight the way things are has no substance, it's not a judgment, it's a witch, not to mention I feel that you manipulated things a little too much to paint them as possessive monsters, not I made it to the end because of it. I had some expectations, I sincerely like when the princesses are shown as not being as good as we think they are and that this whole history of manipulating the climate and nature is problematic for several reasons, but I prefer it when it is done with some moderation to they are not just greedy monsters and liars.

Will there be a sequel/rewrite of this?

charting the unknown and extending your reach into the unknown possibilities and meet new friends

Is what happens in my story, "Worldwide adventures." Here's the link.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/470207/worldwide-adventures

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