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Krystal Clearskies


Hi. I write things and have trouble finishing them. My greatest joy will always be reading comments from people enjoying my stories. Talk with me sometime!

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Jordan had always been a prankster. He'd always been a trouble maker. And when a prank goes horrifically wrong, Jordan is dished some very tough love by his adoptive mother, Celestia. What will Jordan do now, and where will he go from here? Only time will tell.

(A very quick write on an idea that had been swimming in my brain for awhile. Might become a full series if you guys like it, so be sure to let me know!)

Credit for the picture goes to Plainoasis

Edited & Proofread by _HiveHero

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

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I'd love critique from you both if you ever have time. I can write a lot better than this, this was just a bit rushed because i wrote it during time off from work (which sadly isn't often). But some education from you two would be awesome if you ever have time!

-Syren.

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Done and done, thanks for that. Saved this picture quite a while ago and forgot where it was from or who created it.

9374424 I only recognized it because I used the later version on one of my stories. :twilightblush:

It's a pretty good start so far. Kinda hurts and sucks seeing someone basically completely disowned and having to kinda lose the ones you love is awful. Would be interesting as a series to see how Jordan would make amends with everyone and to re-earn their trust. I would like to see where it goes

When is the next chapter?

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