This story is a sequel to The Royal Apples: Into the Land of Neverwere
When the decision is made to return the Elements of Harmony to their proper place in the tree, it is up to Luna and Big Mac to oversee their restoration. Unfortunately, even a simple task such as this can be complicated where deep magic is involved. A sequel to: Into the Land of Neverwere.
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Sweet. Welcome back.
Yu hu sequel at last
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Well now, didn’t see that one coming.
do u have a sound clip of what luna played to open the passage? i am not musically gifted and so cannot picture it...
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Thank you, can't promise how long this story will be but I hope you enjoy the ride and feel free to comment. It makes me a better writer.
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Has it really been that long? Thanks and feel free to comment. It makes me a better writer.
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Okay... What comment did you want me to respond to?
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Part of writing is trying to contrast and change things up, otherwise the story becomes boring. (He's sneaky, my prescious... gollum.)
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Think of a famous science fiction movie where a five note chord plays an important part in the plot.
It has dude, it has, I have been entertaining myself with my own story but I would check the status from time to time, glad to see you back at it. Good luck, i will keep reading.
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u mean...
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Eeeyup!... :)
its been awhile. So great to see a sequel.
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Thanks. Any observations that can improve my storytelling?
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couldnt resist could u?
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Nnnope!
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Not that I'm aware of. You seem to be doing good for the most part. Just a few mispelled words. But other then that, things seem to be written well.
A plant...well, beggars can't be choosers but given the situation, it wasn't that bad of a pick.
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Unless of course she starts going to seed.
Yay more Royal Apples. :D
This sentence made me smile.
Anyways, Nightmare Plunderer was a rather short-lived villain for a season opener, but guess that's what one gets for messing with Luna and Big Mac. Still, it leaves the possibility of Nightmare teaming up with Tirek in the future...or not if either decides to overwhelm the other in a bid for dominance.
I'm trying a new idea with the story. Instead of one long twenty chapter adventure, I'm going to try a lot of small, two or three chapter episodes that can be strung together into a longer format.
Essentially, what happens in one story will continue as elements of another. That way I can keep the details fresh and clear and not lose them amid a morass of plot. As to Plunderer being defeated so quickly, it was more a matter of her not realizing the power of Luna, Princess of Nightmares.
Thanks for the chapter, keep them coming
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I'm trying a new idea with the story. Instead of one long twenty chapter adventure, I'm going to try a lot of small, two or three chapter episodes that can be strung together into a longer format.
Essentially, what happens in one story will continue as elements of another. That way I can keep the details fresh and clear and not lose them amid a morass of plot. As to Plunderer being defeated so quickly, it was more a matter of her not realizing the power of Luna, Princess of Nightmares.
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If you read my comment to Not So New Brony, then you know I will be writing the next set of stories as independent short collections that link together in overall theme. i.e. The Royal Apples. Hopefully this will improve my creativity and more importantly my pacing. What do you think?
Well? Is your story and you know how to better present it to us, it will be interesting to see how it comes out, I'll keep reading anyway so good luck.
Weird, for some reason this didn't register as updated for me, I only found out because I checked manually. Oh well, was a great chapter i'm glad I didn't miss forever. Cant wait to see what happens next.
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Don't know why, unless it's because I changed the title to Princess and the Tree instead of Farmer and the Tree. (Felt it better reflected who the story focused on). Chapter 2 is the end of this story, but not the end of the Royal Apples. I am going to try to write shorter stories that weave together in continunity, much like the Series itself. That should make updates quicker and your input more meaningful.
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Hmm, I see. If you think that's for the best then alright.