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BoltTheColt


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Bolt is your average stallion. He works hard, and gives every project his all. The problem is, Bolt never has time for friends, often locking himself in his room with his building projects. After the birth of his brother, Rivet, Bolt appears to begins to show signs of being sociable, but his parents are afraid both brothers will not flourish in the big city of Fillydelphia. Making a hard decision, they send the duo to the little town of Ponyville, where they can make friends and groom Bolt to take over his dad's failing business. But Bolt wants to be more than just a simple carpenter like his dad. He wants to be known as a great inventor, and he's going to need all the help he can get if he wants his dream to come true.

Artwork is copyright of Sprinters at Deviantart.com.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Okay, so this is the first chapter of the first fan fiction I've ever written. Pretty excited to see where I can go from here, but until then, the simple tale of my OC. Critiques are welcomed,because I'm going to need all the help I can get. Hope you enjoy, and know there's much more to come.

You sir, have caught my eye....
couldn't really see anything too out of place and pacing was pretty good. Overall keep up the good work!

1039356 Thanks! Hopefully, I can upload the next chapter sometime this weekend, but can't make any promises, what with school starting up again. I shall soldier on, though!

1028347at first i was like: "ill read this, might give give me a good read"

then i was all like :rainbowlaugh:

at the last bit there i was :rainbowlaugh:

Would everyone please read my blog post, as it will be going over my... schedule, if you can call it that, and as always, please help out with critiques. Thank you!

fukkin spot on as per usual, no mistakes (well I didn't notice anything, which I normally do) and a good balance of humor
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1255868 Gosh darnit, you guys are nice! Every time I check new comments like these, it's a GIANT confidence booster. Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long, but I'm not making any promise I can't keep.:twilightsmile:

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