Split Mask, a changeling, one who hides who he really is behind a mask, and is thought to have disguises that have their own personalities. Its where he got his name, well not by himself however. it's a long story, we'll get to that eventually. This is about his past, the present, and the years between them. This is his story as he lives in the chaotic town of Ponyville, and as he grows up to become the ling he will be.
How will he survive the many ponies living in the many different towns he'll visit over the course of his new life?
How will he survive in disguise, with hundreds of disguises written in a book at his disposal?
How will he survive being friends with the towns ponies... especially after the events of the Royal Wedding?
The answer? His metaphorical mask, willpower, and good looks.
Oh boy here we are again, another story I might not finish because I have too many ideas. Might as well have this here. Not sure when it'll progress. But hey, it's something.
The present takes place one week before the thousandth Summer Sunset Celebration.
Image was done by a friend. I can't take credit for something they had done.
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There are a lot of instances where two words could've been put together, It doesn't make the story unreadable, but it does take up more space. I decided to just let you know instead of pointing out every instance.
Great job at writing out the story, and a great summary at the start. I would rate the story writing skills 8.5/10 until further notice, how long it takes will be taken into account. I would enjoy to see more of your writing in the future.
(Disclaimer) I'm not a professional writer nor am I an editor, I merely am saying what I see as a normal reader.
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This chapter was much cleaner and I personally couldn't find a mistake.
I'm loving this story so far, and hope to see more, don't overwork yourself and stay creative.
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You misspelled equestria.
I like this so far
Really good chapter, I hope you continue this story