The markers are brilĺiant!
I knew for whom I was reading immediately

This chapter was both arousing and hilarious. Well done xD

This was amazing!!!! Loved it!! I am praying that he knocks a pony up!! I hope it happens

I think I might write a couple of RGRE stories. After I finish some of the stories I currently have out now.

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What story is it?

Each peck was a hint, a way to tease her subconscious of things to come. Her mons grew hot, with a small tinge of red around the edges, and a thin trail of syrupy marejuice stretched from her labia to the floor.

I'm sure you don't mean the Capital of Hainaut of Belgium here.

You brought a hand up and smacked it across Bon Bon’s flank, the slap ringing out in the empty shop.

Didn't a bunch of customers just come in recently?

Yay! I did something! Thank you my friend for taking my request and what a great two chapters it was. I really look forward to more magical hijinx

*Applause*
Another stage cleared

We've seen how thirsty Twi is last chapter, and it seems there's a big conga line of mares pining Anon

Let's see how he'll progress after this

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>>mons
Short for "mons pubis"

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I actually didn't realize it wasn't there. My bad. It's up now.

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Mons pubis. Fixed the empty shop thing. The pony crowd was an afterthought and got added later.

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Glad they're working. I had my reservations about using Anon's symbol, as it invokes the image of a green weirdo, rather than a simple human male, but I figure we might as well go all the way. Also, astoundingly, there wasn't a mane six cutie mark vector album on imgur and the ones I found for some of them were huge. I might use this again in the future. They came out real crisp.

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This was amazing!!!! Loved it!!

Awesome. I'm glad you're enjoying my lewds. Learning to write porn has been a trial so it's great to see people who like it.

I am praying that he knocks a pony up!! I hope it happens

Heh, well as you know, the story is aimed at being pretty vanilla, so there's not going to be any intense stuff. However I've had a really strong inclination to have a particular character want that on a subconscious/instinctual level. I don't think I'd write "I want to have your foals!" or anything but maybe some lewd prose about being 'bred' and how it's making her happy on an instinctual level. Not sure. I have to kinda research the thing a little more.

I think I might write a couple of RGRE stories. After I finish some of the stories I currently have out now.

Awesome. I love to read RGRE, so good luck on your RGRE and current stories.

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*Applause*
Another stage cleared

Kinda. Twi arc is on the longer side as it includes several mares. Bon Bon was kind a spur of the moment thing. I wanted a scene where one of the mares takes a backseat and coaches Anon with another mare. This was how it ended up.

We've seen how thirsty Twi is last chapter,

I can't wait till you read her sex scene. She is a very thirsty mare. A year of pent up lust does a lot to a mare.

it seems there's a big conga line of mares pining Anon

Yeah it's a constant habit of mine to bring in lots of competition. Twi lands pretty much in the friend bucket I feel but it definitely skirts the edge. I suppose that's partly the nature of the universe too. I think a few people will end up rooting for her. I generally feel that if people are rooting for the characters to get together due to chemistry, other than the main girl, I'm doing something right.

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thank you!!

overtaking over your mind.

Probably should get rid of one of those 'over's. Great chapters. Too bad Twilight is having a hard time seeing things from a human's perspective and just assumes our lives are terrible, but I can't fault her since I think similar things of other countries. Also, I forgot to mention before that to justify Dash's anger towards Anon, you could make it so that she feels deceived for being told she could be Anon's first only to find out that Anon would apparently much rather masturbate than make love with her after she bared her heart out over being insecure that stallions don't find her attractive.

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Huh... The more you know I guess. Excuse my ignorance there.

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Corrected.

Also been brainstorming a lot of Dash stuff with my lewd-lord buddy Mobius. That was one of the things we came up with. Honestly I won't know what I go with until I try to write the scene. Sometimes the words do what they want, if that makes sense. Muse takes you places.

But yes, that part of her conflict is likely going to need very few changes. She'll be more understanding of the cultural difference is the goal, but it should still hurt because she thought they were close, and he never mentioned any discomfort about sex or culture differences to her. When she bore herself to him, and learned later that he didn't trust her enough to tell her the truth, she'll be rightfully hurt and leave the meeting early. Her conflict will therefore revolve more closely around something personal.

Pinkie's will be much like it has been. The rejection should still hurt her. I like that concept. But she'll understand and be more alarmed that he's been uncomfortable about sex without telling any of them.

Essentially the focus of the conflict should be that Anon is suffering under the cultural divide and he never told any of his friends.

somehow I still think that was kind of fucked

"Who in Anon's world made him like this" Twilight asks.

OH HO, BOY DO I WISH HE'D TELL YOU!

*edit*
This is more for last chapter than this one.

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I'm happy to see my suggestion was already thought of, even if it doesn't make the cut. Though now I'm curious about what other ideas you came up with. I guess I'll just wait and see whichever you end up doing. 😊

That's our boy!!

Anon you lucky bastard.

You've inspired me to write my own Casual Sex Equestria story. Surprised there aren't more of those.

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I can't wait till you read her sex scene. She is a very thirsty mare. A year of pent up lust does a lot to a mare.

Will... will it be as hot as Alcor's Twi X Anon comic?
Please be yes

Good stuff as always. Poor Twi's getting all pent up which I'm sure will be addressed soon. I look forward to reading the next update.

You gotta continue! This is AMAZING!

I just read from start to the current chapter (9) and all I can say is... Who gave you the right?! How dare you make me feel these feels while at the same time make me deal with a hard on!? Seriously, the emotional depth for what I thought was going to be a silly clop comedy, which it totally still is, was astounding. I might just be a big sappy idiot, or relate too closely to what was being said, but Rainbow, Pinkie, and Twilight all brought tears to my eyes. I eagerly await the next chapter.

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Well hot dang. More sex-questria stories are always nice. I'll read the shit out of it when it comes out.

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It'll be updating for a while more. Don't worry.

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I went with a fairly unique angle I haven't read much of in any porn. It's kinda its own thing. Difficult to compare porn hotness between two mediums but they're somewhat similar. I personally HATE using the heat card as a plot device but there's definitely some pheromone induced arousal.

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Soon. Also a rewrite is coming eventually that will address a lot of the issues you've brought up. Hopefully.

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Welcome, and I'm really glad you've been enjoying yourself.

Who gave you the right?! How dare you make me feel these feels while at the same time make me deal with a hard on!? Seriously, the emotional depth for what I thought was going to be a silly clop comedy, which it totally still is, was astounding.

Aw, heh. Thanks. These types of comments make my day. Yeah, I mean, it IS a silly clop at the end of the day, but I write what I want to read, and I really enjoy romance/friendshipping. I'm just happy other people find it as engaging as they have. Trying to balance the plot pacing with the porn has been stressful.

Her feminin scent stood out as sweet, though it didn’t resemble sugar exactly—more like honey with a tangy note.

feminine

Her mons grew hot, with a small tinge of red around the edges, and a thin trail of syrupy marejuice stretched from her labia to the floor.

moans

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"A rewrite is coming to address all you've said."

I am actually super looking forward to that.

Another wonderful chapter, and I enjoyed seeing things from Twilight's perspective. Figures the librarian would have such a kinky spell. Good thing Unicorns are silly or Hearths Warming Eve would've had a very different tale then friendship. Also, love that Bon Bon's first reaction is worrying about not having showered.

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Great chapters. And thanks for using those POV markers.

Sexy and sweet.

Most excellent.

I'm one of those people who don't read or watch porn for the actual porn but rather for some of the ridiculous flower writing. And the more porn I read the more I want Rick's portal gun so that I can find the alternate reality where aroused sexual organs and sexual fluids taste and smell of honey, sweets, and whatever random tasty thing the author fancies typing in.

It's not quite as novel as the hammy-ness of Demon Beast Invasion (But how do you beat a movie where an islander fucks a dolphin-shaped alien and miscarries its mermaid baby after being beaten with sticks by angry villagers?) but it's on a higher level than a foreign flick I saw with a guy who had a thick accent going in raw with the quote "Dees iz grrrreat."

This is my kind of story, looking forward to everything forward. PE may be odd to me in our world, but I see it as extremely hot in Equestria, couldn’t fully explain why.

This chapter WS like good candy sweet and spicy.

Daaaamn, Anon doin’ them mares proud!

Awwww!!!!!