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Twilight Sparkle is a teenage girl just trying to live her life as invisible as possible: as an outcast she just wants to go through her life unnoticed. Until one day, after helping out an acquaintance from school, she is chosen to be a protector and champion of her world, with all the powers and responsibilities that come with it. Now with the trainer of heroes and one of the most popular boys at school at her side, she will find her place and make her mark as a hero herself.

After all, she may not be the hero they want, but she's the hero they need.


(Tags and likely the story name are prone to change as the story goes on.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

So far not half bad.

Not a bad start, I'll give you an upvote.

All I can say is wonderful job on the start of this story. This little look at Twi's daily life before the circumstances that lead to the real adventure beginning is excellent. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups are all well done in all the right places.

I am very certainly going to be looking forward to more of this.

So Twilight's basically Shazam?

All I can say is excellent job on this latest chapter. The action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the scenes at school, Twilight finding out about Flash's being a comic book fan , Flash's reaction to Sunset's thinly veiled threats against Twilight , Twilight's helping out Flash against those thugs and Twilight's encounter with who I guess to be Celestia's mortal alter ego in this universe .


I'm also going to hazard a guess that Twilight's powers will be either based on the Pillars' abilities (Starswirl's magical abilities, Rockhoof's strength, Mistmane's connection with nature, Flash Magnus's special armor, Mage Meadowbrook's medical knowledge, etc.) or on the abilities of an alicorn (unicorn telekinesis, Earth pony strength and durability and Pegasus flight and weather control). But I could admit that I could easily be wrong on both counts.

Anyway, I WILL most assuredly be looking forward to more of this.

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Kind of a mix between Wonder woman, Shazam, and Captain Marvel.

Excellent job on the latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places.

I particularly liked how Twi handled those three punks and learned about her newly increased strength, speed, stamina and eyesight. Not to mention the others' reactions to Twilight's saving Flash (not the FULL details though) and Twilight's helping out Pinkie. I also loved seeing Twi successfully defending herself against Gilda without even throwing a single punch.

So, yes, you did an absolutely wonderful job overall.

🧩🐺🐉I’ve read this before, pretty good, but I prefer your other stories were they are mages. I really like to see E.G. version of “Crusaders Of The Lost Mark”, you know the episode where the Cutie Mark Crusaders get their cutie marks, like would you depicted that, just a thought, you don’t have to if you don’t want to.🧩🐺🐉

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