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NorsePony


I am not a person, but I play one on TV.

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Finally so many pairings with Rarity I was beginning to think Fleur just stop existing like her existance card got revoked or something.

Read this on 60MP, and I must say, you've captured their similar tastes, as you call it, splendidly.

You, sir, are a boss. *bows*

Well done. As a married man, I can relate quite a bit...

:pinkiehappy:

Daaaaaaaaaammnn.

One of the best examples of short, well-written consensual kink I've seen. Love it, faved, watched.

Aru

Damn you, first words said by Fleur.... eh. I almost choked with my own tea!

"She licked her lips and raised her head, rubbing her cheeks and nose over his sheath and heavy balls, inhaling his particular scent with deep, greedy breaths..."

When I read "deep, greedy breaths" all I could think of was:
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Congratulations! Your boner is now dead!

"Redolent: full of a specified fragrance."
I learned a new word today!

"...she could do nothing but be a passive receptacle for him to fuck into. She was just a toy. Just his toy."

"Fancypants loomed over her, held frozen in that endless moment before his orgasm filled them both, and he grated out, “You come too, toy.”

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It's not hypocritical if I admit that I'm also guilty of it.

Final thought: Very well-written. At times the sexual metaphors involving oars and such were a little too flowery for my tastes.
Overall, a fine read. :twilightsheepish:

1128214 Fleur didn't get much screen time, but she was an interesting anomaly, and Fancypants struck me as a decent fellow, so it seemed that he'd probably be with Fleur for more than her looks. So here we are. : D

1128309 1128339 Well thank you, sirs. :pinkiehappy:

1128352 Glad you liked it. I feel like there isn't much interesting kink portrayed in ponyfic, so I tried to do my part to rectify that.

1128482 She doesn't bother beating around the bush, haha.

1128522 Fleur specifically requested that he use her as a toy for his pleasure. It was her submission fantasy which determined the scene they played, and which she took great pleasure in. Fancypants was performing the Dominant role she requested he play. Kink does not equal misogyny. :twilightsmile:

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"Fleur specifically requested that he use her as a toy for his pleasure. It was her submission fantasy which determined the scene they played, and which she took great pleasure in. Fancypants was performing the Dominant role she requested he play. Kink does not equal misogyny."

Fair enough.
The willing submission fantasy was never my cup of tea, but you pulled it off quite well for those who enjoy it. :twilightblush:

I think this was the most realistic piece of smut I've ever read. :twilightsmile: It was well written, and you didn't try to create some half-assed storyline around it.
However, what I really like is the high degree of realism, as far as realism goes in a story about rutting unicorns. You rarely see a safety word in other stories on this site, but the limits, and the aftercare made it pretty believable.

“Fancy, I would enjoy being fucked.”

:facehoof: Not even bothering with a story, huh?

Ah, something new and different. :twilightsmile:

Jolly good show sir!

Finally a FleurDePants fic I really like. I always thought Fancy was better off with Fleur.

The only thing I could find in this story was the following line: "His appreciation for her as a person..." Believe you meant "pony."

Other than that, this was wonderful, and seeing as how I'm a huge fan of married couples doing their thing, I'll definitely be tracking this.

Hot hot hot! Just imagining that deep throat,,, uagh! Thumbs up! :moustache:

1128813 Thanks. :twilightsmile: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

1128865 Haha, it made me laugh while I was writing it, too. It was an image that popped into my head, and I figured I may as well use it since it wasn't going away. And yeah, you totally should. I'd love to see you coming down to play. I miss reading your stuff.

1129986 :heart:

1132607 Well, it was originally written with a time limit in mind, so I wanted to get down to business. Also, I enjoy the idea that she can just, y'know, say she'd like some sex, and he rolls with it.

1132616 Why thank you, my good sir.

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1132839 It's a pairing I like too. They seemed to have good chemistry in their brief appearance together, and there's something to be said for shipping two good-looking ponies together.

1133222 :pinkiehappy: Glad you enjoyed it.

1133331 Ponies are people too. There are a fair few canonical examples of un-punned pronouns, such as "girls," "children," "everyone," and so on. I'm perfectly comfortable thinking that ponies would think of themselves as "people," just like we don't normally refer to ourselves as humans: "I'm going to the beach with a few humans." It's silly. : D

1133855 I know, right?

Awwwww. Fleur and Fancy having a little fantasy playtime. Much like Bronystories up there, the doormat fantasy has never been much on my list of things. But these two cutie kinksters get at least a bit of a pass. I love the pairing, and you capture everything well. You get a thumbs up and a mustache. :moustache:

1133939 I think Fancy and Rarity just don't go well with each other. Ponies say that Spike's too young for her, but I say that Fancy seems too OLD for Rarity. Seriously, he looks like he's probably twice her age, or probably in his 40's. Also Fleur and Fancy were together throughout most of the episode.

1134932 Fancy/Rarity makes sense to me for the same reasons it probably makes sense to other folks: they got along well, Rarity seemed to find him appealing, and then of course in the season finale, he was shown with her, and Fleur was nowhere in sight. Also, as a matter of characterization, Fancypants is a pretty appealing partner from Rarity's perspective, as he is famous, apparently very important, fairly obviously wealthy, and moves in the upper crust of Canterlot society. So I can totally see where the pairing comes from.

For this story, mainly I just think Fleur is forgotten about too often, and Rarity stars in a lot of clopfics, so 2 + 2 = Fleur/Fancy. : D

1134953 Granted Fancy did treat Rarity well and all, but I think these two are strictly friends and nothing more.

1134988 That's also entirely possible. I dunno, I'm a low-intensity shipper. I'm willing to accept any ship as long as the author sells me on it. When I'm writing a story, the ship I choose is the one that'll make the most interesting story. Here, I felt that I had more room to work with Fleur than I did with Rarity in terms of selling the reader on her kinky sexuality, as well as the factors I mentioned before, therefore I chose Fleur. No OTPing was involved in the making of this story. : D

1135045 Well I hope to see more of Fleur's kinkiness with Fancy soon. This is already a good story and can't wait for more.

“I would enjoy being fucked.”

This is where I knew it was going to be glorious!
You sir, are one classy mofo!
-Glassed

1142907 Allow me to lift a snifter of brandy to you, my good sir.

Exactly what it says on the package, prime quality, perfect length and just the right amount of everything. Nothing outstanding, but everything definitely good. A standard, but a standard of excellent quality. Not a story to remember fondly for years, not one to return in our dreams, but I wish more of them came like that. I can imagine coming into clop shop, and the shopkeeper reaching to the upper shelf: "You won't be disappointed in this one, sir. Excellent vintage."

Wait, what? :applejackconfused:

Well, that was unexpected.

Thank you for this story. I will show myself out. Take care and... umm... I don't know, change the tags and add a "Swingers" or "Adultery" tag somewhere. Good day.

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I just look at it from a different angle, and don't really concern myself with how they approach it. It shows a kind of ephermerality. Relations are mere words, or less. But that is just my take. I'm glad you like it. The first chapter was fine. It was just one couple. The second was not and that is the base of it.

I thank you kindly for your civility.

I saw the comment about misogyny by Bronystories, and at first I just disagreed, but now I'm thinking that this is probably the most profoundly non-misogynistic, anti-rape-culture story I've read on this site. Here's why:

1) Pre-negotiation. Fleur and Fancy both go over what they want, rather than just diving in with Fancy taking the lead and either doing exactly what he wants, or guessing based on what she wanted last time. Fleur specified both what she wanted to happen (humiliation, power play) and what she did not want to happen (pain, hitting). This both helps ensure that they have lots of fun, and also helps kill the rape-culture trope of 'miscommunication,' especially in relationships, where the perp says everything started out like it always did, and he/she just didn't realise the victim didn't want it.

2) Safewords and a mercy word, pre-negotiated, and a safety signal for when talking is, ahem, less convenient.

3) Fancy asks for explicit, enthusiastic consent before shagging. He does it in a roundabout way to keep the fantasy going, but asks nontheless. This gives her a chance to say her safeword, mercy word or anything before the game moves on.

4) Fleur uses her mercy word as soon as it doesn't feel good. She doesn't try to grin and bear it because Fancy is having fun and that would be raising a fuss, or anything like that. Fancy backs off the moment she uses it, and even more importantly doesn't act wheedling, huffy or passive-aggressive about it. Not even in a jokey hah-look-at-you-stopping-our-fun-sex way. Especially not in a jokey hah-look-at-you-stopping-our-fun-sex way. He takes a short break from the game to smile and reassure her.

I don't think I've seen a clopfic on this site, kinky or otherwise, that does all those things. I can think of a few that use enthusiastic consent, and one or two that negotiate safewords. I can't think of any that mention pre-negotiation, which should be an important part of even non-kinky sex, or any fic where a safeword (or mercy word) is actually used.

So kudos, not just for making an awesome clopfic, but for making an awesome clopfic with the best and most coherent sexual ethics I've ever seen on FimFiction.

I'd love for Applejack to show me the ropes, hehehe.

1154741 I don't even know what to do with all these feels. I just... thanks for that. It means so much to me to hear such positive words from someone who is pretty obviously kinky, and who knows their shit about consent and negotiation and so on. You've made my day. :heart:

Nice. Keep on doing these. :twilightsmile:


Oh, and if people are calling this 'rape' of any kind, they're talking out of their arse. :raritywink:

Holy legendary debauchery, Batman.

...I'll be in my bunk.

Not exactly a fan of this chapter. I thought it would be just Applejack, not Rarity as well. As I already stated, I am not a real big fan of RariPants. Good effort, but again, not a fan of RariPants. :ajbemused:

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That can happen sometimes. I encounter folks I cannot understand. That's just a part of life I suppose.

I'm not necessarily arguing for exclusive monogamy. I guess I just view many relationships with a bit more weight and gravity. Primarily because I enjoy the "end of the journey" relationships where there has been a MEANING to getting together. and there would be no need to involve anyone else. It would be entirely superfluous.

But again, that's only me. I can almost see the idea but then all that comes to mind is "ephermeral." So, that's all.

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Hey, I'm not awesome for pointing it out, you're awesome for writing it :eeyup:

I'm not that kinky, but that's more because I'm lazy and cba to find a pantsfuntimes partner more than once a year. And I learned most of what I know about sexual ethics from the inimitable Cliff Pervocracy and the unparalelled Captain Awkward I remember reading those guys for the first time and being all YES YES THIS THIS ALL THIS THIS IS SO RIGHT!


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Awww thanks :twilightblush:

1161084 Oh jeez yes, I love the Pervocracy. Cliff is the person who set me on the path of learning about sexual ethics and gender equality too. I recommend No Seriously, What About Teh Menz? too, although you're probably already familiar with that blog.

1154872 It's been expanded well beyond the original 60-minute content, so don't be too impressed. : D

1155061 I plan to. And thanks. :pinkiehappy:

1155752 Glad you liked it. :raritywink:

1155814 I've never heard the name RariPants, and it makes me giggle every time I read it. Don't worry, different partners are coming (if you know what I mean).

1161157 I thought this was supposed to be about just Fancy and Fleur.

1162274 Fancy and/or Fleur will be in every story, yes.

1162747 What I meant was is that I thought that it was just about a married couple and their sexual adventures. It's an interesting twist though to see others get in on it. Talk about an open marriage.

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And anypony else their delightfully... cultured... tastes end up involving, I'd say. Though a 'open relationship' or 'swingers' tag wouldn't be remiss, I wouldn't include Adultery, since everypony's fully consenting.

Also, what Chuck said. All of what Chuck said, because it's far more elegantly put than I would have managed. I love, love, love seeing atypical relationships handled in what the healthy, SSC/RACK (Safe, Sane, and Consensual/Risk Aware Consensual Kink) way is, just because it's so unusual.

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HEY, Sam Axe! You sir have said everything I thought about this fanfic. If I knew you in person, I'd buy you a beer or a mojito.
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This is nice:pinkiesad2: and romantic:heart: I would like to see more.

...Reads chapter 2...
:rainbowderp::applejackconfused::raritywink::moustache:
Well I asked for more and I got it

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