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Lonely Fanboy48


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Princess Twilight returns to help her human friends to find out on why there's Equestria magic in the human world. She also tries to get along with her Human Counterpart because she feels weird when she talks to her. Also her student Starlight and Spike goes with her to help her but The Sirens got there gems repair and want revenge on the Rainbooms.

Thanks to MoJoK20X for editing this.

https://www.fimfiction.net/user/221451/MoJoK20X

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 7 )

The misspelling is abundant. Singular words where plural would be better. More could be done.

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This and Sunsets Collide are my first fanfics I did but looking at them now after almost 2 years before the Equestria Girls 22 minute specials, I moved on and might do another story similar to this. I did made a third Counterpart story but I give up when I finished the 3rd chapter.

This isn’t all that bad of a story. It is very good, much better than anything I could dream up.:heart:

“In the woods?” Aria Blaze scoffed before she saw two Twilights in the same room. “Wait a second, there’s two of them...”

It's getting out of hand now there are two of them.

The Dazzlings just so happen to get their powers back feels a bit sloppy here

An okay story that has some errors here and there and feels a bit rushed

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This is one of my first fanfics from 2017.

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