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anonpencil


Don't read my stuff if you have a weak stomach or are easily bothered by traumatic genitalia damage. That's seriously all I've got in here!

Comments ( 93 )

haven't read it et, but this idea just seems hilarious

A true masterpiece.

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I dunno man. I just...
I...
I dunno.

I'm mildly disappointed that the chapter title wasn't something more along the lines of "Aisle C You In Hell".

Otherwise this was great.

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OH I like that better. I shall use it!!!

So. I read this. This was a thing. That I read. It was weird, this thing that Itakeallofmywatyougoofynutjobread.

Sorry, I think Isweetlordyjeebusinabananahammockwhatthefucksneezed.

I hope it's nothavingvietnamflashbacksbutwithpancakesandalphabitsthanksobamacontagious.

This was unique and original, I'll give youwhatincelestiasnamedididotodeservethisthat. Have a like.

:pinkiecrazy:*twitch*:pinkiecrazy:

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I'm honored. Now you just gotta change the line near the end to "Cleanup on aisle C."

edit: Alright, no more improvements can be made. Now it's perfect.

9356708
Already done ;)

...wat?

I mean it was funny but... bro, what are you on right now?

I have soy many regrets.

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For once, I am sober.
Maybe that's the problem.

I think this has nearly made me loose my mind; and it’s already not all there anyway. 🤪

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Yup, there it is.

Does this count as vore?

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...I don't rightly know. I suppose if you want it to be?

I haven't even read it, I saw it and immediately thought of Evil Dead.
But then I read some of the reviews and...
Wot m8?? :rainbowhuh:

Well, this was a thing that I read.

Needs more pandas. :derpytongue2:

I am at once fascinated and terrified of how your mind works. I like how that makes me feel.
You are an interesting writer, pencil!

"Why is it always the soy milk?" she mutters.

I fell out of my chair laughing and smashed my knee into the corner of my coffee table... Which has a metal frame by the way. :twilightangry2: it was completely worth it though, Amazing work!. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

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HAHAHAHAHA
please don't die. :(

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I had a two by four smashed over the top of my head like a club. :rainbowdetermined2: a little love tap to the knee won't take me down. :pinkiecrazy:

EDIT: As long as it's not an arrow then I'll be fine. :rainbowwild:

What drugs were you on when writing this, and where can I get some?

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Soft Vore? Unbirthing? Transformation? Size Difference? Dub-Con? Mind Break? Retail Jobs.

Love the chapter title.

At the risk of pissing off ppl... I have a theory: This is what it is like to have severe brain damage. :twilightoops:

Did I like this? I don’t even know what this is. :facehoof: But I enjoyed how it hurt my mind.

If anyone else were to try this, they'd have probably failed.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I THINK that's a compliment, and I will so take it!

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It is, haha, it very much is!

~Skeeter The Lurker

A bold and innovative new direction for the Human in Equestria genre.

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Does it even count as human in equestria though?? :/

Wut. Just wut.

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It's the challenging questions like these that this stories raises which make it so groundbreaking.

This was... a very interesting read, in all truthfulness.

I don't remember telling anyone what I experienced during my coma

This was strange, but I liked it.

...ok...


...kinky...

Why!? Why is it kinky!?

I'm so confused...

Has anyone ever seen the Star Trek episode "Spock's Brain" before?

Set

I have so many questions...
mainly how the hell you managed to combine sex, transformation, and a supermarket together.

Neat story but I can't flap to this. And that's okay.

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Ooh, can I make suggestions too? You should have made Spike have to clean it up because Spike is worst fax machine.

Now you need to write a sequel about "additions" being added onto the market. Maybe a new wing and a fresh coat of paint. :rainbowlaugh: would that count as plastic surgery? :rainbowhuh:

cursed!image

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With a tragic end where the ponies demolish it to make room for a golf course or a parking lot or something equally useless.

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Maybe if he dies as the Market he gets reincarnated as a golf ball or golf club. :rainbowlaugh:

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