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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

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Comment posted by Mcbean deleted Jan 6th, 2019

Ruinings Cadence's reputation while sucking off stallions left and right... unf. So good.

I love the way you write Chrysalis, here and in all the others you've written with her. She's proud but not so much so that it blinds her to the truth. And she shows just the right level of being a total slut, where most of it is an act for ulterior motives, but the girl can't deny she does love a big pony dick in her mouth.

Also, did you write that whole opening 500 words in the changing room to explain in the cover art why the swimsuit in the mirror was a different colour?

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"Except that, you know, changelings are a thing. Remember Canterlot?" Ruining reputation, along with many long-term changeling effects only work if people are unaware of the possibility.

Although maybe it didn't happen in this continuity, so who knows.

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Just bughorse doing bughorse things. :twilightsmile:

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Also, did you write that whole opening 500 words in the changing room to explain in the cover art why the swimsuit in the mirror was a different colour?

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Maybe.
I mean, there were some other things that scene was doing. Trying to exposit some of Chryssy’s motivation & current situation, some convenient body description that’s hopefully pretty sexy to set the mood of the story...

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Sure, sure... But I think most of them would think that ‘that’s over now’ (especially since most of the changelings are reformed now?), and while it might eventually occur to them, it wouldn’t be the first thing they’d think of.

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Yeah, like that'll stop the rumors. And everyone will say "Well, they're trying so hard to blame on changelings... ".

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Eh. First, you assume SO much I won't even bother arguing with you seriously,trying to use logic in cartoon where wars waged with pies, ha. Second, maybe public visits are fine and dandy to check, but informal life? And third, people don't care about goverment proofs, and Chrysalis is smart enough to be Cadance in ambiguious times when real one isn't on public events. Rumors will start, ponies will talk ,and reputation would be damaged. You can damage rep pretty much on anything, baseless accusation does this in our day where you can photo and video proof things, in MLP world it would be even easier.

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Heh ... I think we can all agree that Chryssy’s evil plans are not always the best or most practical sort of plans. That’s as much true of canon Chryssy as this version of her.
She has fun though. ^.^

I didn'n mention it yet, but I am lately very obsessed with the caracter of chrysalis. Art, fics and everything else I can find. I love that people can come up with so many different ways of interpreting of feeding one love.

You for example made her see herself as changling, and magic making others see someone else. And the fact that disguised reflection is a whole new thing allows you to do so much with this fact.

In the beggining there was that part where she puts her tail through the hole. I imagine it beeing very hard to do without magic. Or maybe there is a zipper? I don't know.

I am wondering how did she get money dor the best hotel in LosPegasus

I'd love to see what happened at that clothing store after she left it

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*mother breaks out in tears* “Aw, my little boy’s all grown up!”

God damnit every time I go to read one of your stories I just get the all american rejects song stuck in my head XD

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A memorable name helps attract readers, and what could be more memorable than a name that gets stuck in your head? :rainbowwild:

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Just... :rainbowlaugh:

Older stallion elbows the older mare.

"Remember when we used to do that kind of thing? Good times..."

"You mean this morning?"

Mom and son hit the flood with resounding thuds.

What? Older people can have wicked senses of humor!

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Now I kind of wish I’d actually written that into it.

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There’s a (much darker) sequel idea in my ideas list, for my Patreon supporters to vote on each month.

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