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Sunset Shimmer was highly known ever since the Fall Formal incident. That is, until she unexpectedly commited suicide, via knife to the chest. They came to the conclusion that it was depression which lead her to take her own life away.

However, not everyone agrees.

Together, the rest of the Mane gather clues and information, in an effort to find the real reason behind her suicide.

That is, if it is suicide to begin with.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

Celestia’s eyes suddenly became blurry, filled with tears. She wipes them off and sits up straight, looking back down at Luna.

I’m not too good with present tense stuff, but I think you should use “filling” instead of “filled” here.

Also, you might want to add a profanity tag since a few of the characters use strong language.

.......it's the human Sunset isn't it

9352058
Unfortunately, no. This is the Equestrian version of her. But, I plan to include the human one sometime in the ending.

9352017
Thanks for that. I’ll update it later on.

9352608
Wait, so she’s a pony? I thought this was an Equestria Girls fix though.

9353200
Okay, so it’s like this.

Y’all know about human Sunset (the Sunset that lived the human world since the beginning of her time), and the Equestrian Sunset (the one in Fall Formal).

I have plans for the human Sunset, but in this case, the Equestrian version of her was the one who died.

9353207
Ooooh, THAT human Sunset! That makes much more sense!

9353211
Glad to hear things are straightened out now.

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