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Twilight star


I am a shipper of Twilight x Luna and Twilight x Nightmare Moon

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Princess Luna and Princess Celestia rule Equestria ; Luna brings the night and Celestia the day. But what if Celestia turned Daybreaker and was banished, instead of Luna?

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This needs editing, PRONTO.

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Misplaced comm,as, incorrect apostrophe's, where do I start?

9332707
How about getting rid of that misplaced comma in your own sentence first :derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh:

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tHat wou,ld be a good ide!a

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Your doing it on purpose...

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Not bad, I see some potential here

Lunaverse and its sequels already happened, why so sudden?

You can get a free proofreader here
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/]The Proofreader Group

No, they don't own the idea but you should at least see what has already been done
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/760/the-lunaverse

Now, we wait a thousand years for her return

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