For a second, I thought this was a rewrite of Pattycakes.

Thank the lord it isn't.
Btw, Great chapter

That first part of the story was legitimately terrifying, as I could totally see it happening in this story.

But there is something that has been bothering me:
"it was pretty much impossible seeing as the library didn't have a fireplace"
The FUCK it doesn't! What happened to the one they were using at the sleepover, did they just remodel the library because they thought the only use they would get out of it was roasting Rar- marshmallows?

Please though, I've enjoyed every chapter thus far, I know you wont let something like this get to you.

wow this fic is the perverbial shit! keep it up!!

I almost cried at the begining, thinking "oh god , another story that falls into cupcakes style fetish"

Then it was a nightmare.

Never felt so much relief

64736 THIS

Also, your story is good, but I really start hating Fluttershy. Oh hm, Spike and Twilight have sex. Oh hm, let's inform the princess. Oh hm, Spike isn't allowed to stay with her anymore, come to me. Oh hm, sexy dragon, let's fuck. AND I DON'T CARE A GOD DAMN THAT SHE'S SORRY! Okay maybe just a little bit *awkward elbow rub*
Really now, It would probably tear her appart that she's the cause for them to be seperated and then using him (first I wanted to write having sex with him, but it didn't feel strong enough).

Does this mean that Spike is abandoning his intimate relationship with Twilight?

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65274 FUCKING LOL

Oh bronies, don't you see?

Spike is having the equivalent of mystical wet dreams.

His inherent (and brand new, uncontrolled) magic is coming out in ways that his subconscious kinda wants it to - letting him get some action. Hence, EVERYPONY flirting with him. Spike is subconsciously mind-controlling everymare there into wanting a piece o' the hyper-magical dragon.

The only reserve about this fanfic that I have is that you take FOREVER to update! I mean, back when the fic started, you were doing alright, but you HAVE to hurry up now! This fic has just started getting good, don't make us wait!

OH GOD.

FLUTTERSHY HAS GONE CUPCAKES! THEY ARE --

Oh.

why have I read the whole fucking thing!? Seriously, it should have ended when Twilight got arrested. Seriously, it disgusts ms that you continued with the sexual stuff after Spike was taken away from Twilight. I feel like I am going to vomit.

65274 LMFAO

And c'mon Fluttershy. Just..wtf. you do the same thing you got made at Twiligh doing. And you even SAW how telling the Princess affected her! You saw! Ugh. I wonder what Spike is going to do. Also wonder how Twi and Rainbow are holding up...

Oh wow this is on Fimfic? Awesome!
And a new chapter!

66027

quit overreacdtin man

personally i find this shit hilarious

like uh rule 34 hilarious

sometimes, things aren't meant to be taken seriously
clopfics are amongst said things

Everypony, I need to ask all of you something very important. I've been looking at the comments, watching the rating steadily nosedive, and it's pretty clear this story isn't working out as well as I hoped it would. So, with all seriousness, I need to ask: should I discontinue this story? It's fine if you do- I'll just take it down here, on FF.net, and on clopfic.heroku, and we can all forget this ever happened. If you want it to stay, then it'll stay. So what do you think?

6697

I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE THIS

66978
I'd rather it stay; I'm interested to see how this turns out and to see if one of my guesses as to just what's going on is correct.

*clears throat* Ahem.

Yes, you should certainly continue. Frankly, the folks up above are clearly having knee-jerk reactions to what appears to be happening, without following the *obvious* plotline of "why?"

I've uprated you, hopefully others will help.

Not to sound to over dramatic but:

>"should I discontinue this story?"
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I'm actually really enjoying this fic. Yeah, it has its flaws, but overall I think it is very well written and alot of fun to read. It's going in a different direction than I thought it would, but that's part of the fun. Now I'm not you, but it seems like you have an idea of where you want to go with this fic and I'm looking forward to finding out. I think you're doing pretty darn good so far.

It's really up to you though, I would love it if you kept going with this story, but if you don't think its worth it then that's fine too.

66027 if you don't like it don't read it it's in the mature section for a reason hell it's even called a clopfic don't like don't read twilight what do you think? -----> that's what i thought

66978 dude please keep this up this is a great fic and i'm legitimately invested at this point you write great ignore those haters who down vote this awesome fic and keep going

I hope you continue through with it as this is like the first clop-fic that feels like its MORE than a clop-fic. I'm not a fan of Spike cheating on Twilight, but I'm still very much interested in seeing where this is going

66978 why would you even consider this in the first place this is hand down the BEST clopfic i have EVER read keep up the good work. (you think i was gonna give a bad review nope.avi)

Nuuuuuu. Don't quit! The plot has thickened and there's draaamaaaa. Haters gonna hate. Buck 'em. We fans love this and I have to see what happenes next. I check clopfic.heroku everyday hoping that it gets updated with this and a few other stories. Please don't give this up! <3

Who keeps rating this story down?

The rating is being dropped, somone somwhere decided to create a thread telling people to zero bomb all the clopfics on FimFiction its not just this one.

PLEASE DONT GIVE UP!

75129 I had one brief part of my story that would count as "clop" and it dive bombed!

W-T-F-!-?

66978

Dude, if you dare discontinue this fic, I will find you and I will put a revolver against your head until you keep writing more.

Yes, it has its flaws (even Fallout: Equestria had flaws). Yes, the characters are rather OOC. But that shouldn't let you stop writing. My stories are waaaaay worse and I still write because I like it. If you like writing this story, then keep writing it. Don't listen to all the haters out there, your clopfics are actually very well written and they pull me into the story. Certainly much better than what RagingSemi puts out, thats for certain.

What I'm trying to say is, please don't discontinue this story.

>>Proteus-92
Please dont stop writing! I've loved the story so far. Besides, ending it now would be ending it on a cliffhanger.!

And now... we wait.
Just... Just wake me when this here story a yours updates

63111>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978>>66978 There are bronies who would love to read this. I've followed your work from romance report to belief I'd like to say don't stop, but it's up to only one pony... you. What do you want to do?answer honestly you're fans shouldn't get mad if you discontinue... I won't. So you decide.

66978 I personally am looking forward to Spike's visit with Rarity. The way things have played out so far gives tension to the story, and the separation shows the strength of their emotions. I hope to see more soon.

OMGWTFWTHGahahaha!!! Why is there no sex tag on this? I'm starting to enjoy reading these types of stories, what have you done to me?

Please write more, I really like the concept of Spike living with someone other than Twilight. With the last two chapters, I was hooked. I'm really interested in what will happen with Spike and the other mane characters. Will he have to stay with the others and will they find out about Fluttershy?

Please don't abandon your story.

So twilight + spike wouldnt that be a form of incest?

TWIKE i think hold on *looks on another sit e*
It is incest you sicco *silently hits like*
wdetermined2:

Continue this.
If you don't, I will fucking put an RPG-7 to your head.

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spoilers: That wasn't a fireplace. Twilight discovered she had accidentally acquired the OTHER twilight as part of her collection. She was less than pleased.

Beginning:

This changed later on...enjoying it so far! I think I'll read this one through

OH NO NOT SHED.MOV HUMAN CENTIPEDE 2 DORA THE EXPL--

Eh...
...
*cloppety*

The first part of the chapter was weird, I have no idea why you went Pattycakes on us. Not that I care because well, Pattycakes was a weird read for me. I don't find it terrafying at all.

I would much rather like it if Spike had remained made at everypony...

only beef with this is I think Spike should be more endowed

Dream huuu

OK that is bull shit spike is a dragon they are loyal
He would not do this behind twi's back and flutter shy is just doing the same shit it is making my head and heart hert this better be fixed soon because its suppose to be only twilight and spoke the others should not be in this too much

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I agree. If there is ever a time when Spike should get greedy it's when he's plowing a mare.

Oh god that Motherly Fluttershy bit truly had me afraid. I don’t know what it is, but Pattycakes fucked me over a hell of a lot more then Cupcake ever did!

He's got two of them.