I remember seeing this on fanfiction.net

Glad to see it here

Glad this story is finally here! Although, would have preferred if you updated already!

I love this story so much! But I do hate the OOC of the mane six especially Rarity.

CONTINUE THIS

oh my gawd this is like one of the best clopfic-know what it's better than that, this story is awesome, the clop is just a side bonus.

Damn, Fluttershy has a hypocritical streak?

I know it's a clopfic, so the story doesn't matter all that much, but, don't you think it was just a little out of character how her best friends had zero trust in Twilight, and how they pretty much outright tried to completely ruin her without even looking for an explanation first? Some "friends". I've had enemies that treat me nicer. You should really try to make everypony stay in character more. Though the first 3 chapters were pretty good.

good shit dog

This is the only thing I can use to express my opinion on this fic:
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I...

This suddenly got a whole lot better.

Shit just got real.

i cant help but feel responsible for this somehow since i asked why there wernt more twispike fics....and i have yet to regret it either.

I dunno, the first three chapters were pretty solid, but Snuffed Out... Something about the way everypony acted was extremely far off. It just felt... Staggeringly out of character, especially given the group we're talking about. RD tricking Spike into sending an incriminating letter is nothing but massive disloyalty, and I cannot imagine why Pinkie Pie is so torn up about this, unless she's correlating it to something in her own past. Rarity, especially, just wasn't herself in this, and I doubt Celestia would have responded to the situation even remotely that quickly, that harshly, and without ever asking a single question about context. I honestly think I'm going to drop my rating a notch or two, until I see what comes in the future. This was... a bit disappointing, honestly.

ya, very ooc shit

Heh, Pedofoalia. Hehehe. Still giggling at that.

I'm normally really bothered by OOC, but I'm still enjoying this.

Without reading any farther than this, I am calling it. Spike's "Magic" involves passing on his feelings or fantasies or whatever onto everypony around him. Some sort of reverse-empath, that's why everyone is acting so strangely since Spike slept with Twilight. It will also make sense as to why Celestia needed to split them up ASAP. (That is, she thinks the one who did the forcing was actually SPIKE)

There was just soo much wrong with this chapter.... I just dont know where to begin...

63436Agreed!

stallion sticker= gay
filly fooler= lesbian
foal fiddler= pedophile

............huh thats actually pretty damn intresting......i learned so shit just now

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Colt Cuddler is another term commonly used to indicate homosexual relations between stallions or colts, and I have also seen the term "Mare Muncher" used to indicate homosexual relations between mares or fillies.
Now you know! ～★

Does no one realize Spike is only a few years younger than Twi? I think even by those standards, he'd technically be a teen instead of a 'baby'

OK he is a dragon and they grow slower then ponies he is like four years behind them all

I just realized the flaw here.

While Spike doesn't really age without greed, he's only a couple years younger than Twilight. If Twilight is around say 28, that would mean Spike is of legal age and only looks younger due to his physiology.

7888109 going by fan theories in the show, Twilight is around 24-25 years old. Seeing how she first hatched Spike around the age of 6 (the age most children start school), Spike is 18-19 in this story. Plenty old enough.

They never let Spike hear his side before all this mess? Species-ists I tells you.

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I'm happy to say that with the new comic coming out about 20 years ago I thinking that is true, but maybe 26 to 27 instead.

Oh the irony