I laughed so hard at the "Is it in?". Honestly, that was such a harsh and realistic look into sex that I just couldn't help but laugh. If this had ended in disaster (A.k.a Twilight not suggesting the "bump" Spike had found earlier), I'd give you 2012's "Best-Clopfic-Parody" award.
Don't take this personally but wtf do you have against me? "is...is it in" I just walked away from the computer after this part. This chapter just tossed damn near every male sexual insecurity onto spike (i cant even say me lmao.) Not cool author, not cool.
love spike!
Lol sorry theres a reason my usernames awesome spike.. this chapter just made me so wanna do that.
Comment posted by Schrikvis deleted Jan 13th, 2016
Where's the epic facehoove button!! That line "is it in?" It's like dividing by zero!! I have to walk away from this and stroll in the blizzard happening outside my house.
Love it. Fantastically done from two first-timer's points of view and even sweet. It shows Spike's youthful eagerness and the fact that Twilight can't learn everything from books.
Spike finally finished his food. "Well, I have to go- you know that Rarity needs my help today." He hurried to get himself dressed, and opened the front door, only to be immediately buried under a large pile of snow. Spike quickly dug himself out, and saw that the door was completely blocked by a massive wall of it. "It looks like we're snowed in, Spike," Twilight said. Using her magic, she pushed the snow back outside and closed the door.
Who wants to bet that was engineered by a certain purple unicorn?
that she would shout at him and throw him out because he was a sick, depraved little dragon
How would Twilight throw you out? There’s a “massive wall” of snow outside the front door. I also don’t think Twilight’s cruel enough to throw you out the top-floor balcony.
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This is oddly well done for a spikelight(?) clop fic, very nice for what it is.
Poor spike. I almost cried when Twilight said: "Is it in?"
"Is… is it in?"
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I laughed so hard at the "Is it in?". Honestly, that was such a harsh and realistic look into sex that I just couldn't help but laugh. If this had ended in disaster (A.k.a Twilight not suggesting the "bump" Spike had found earlier), I'd give you 2012's "Best-Clopfic-Parody" award.
when twilight said "is it in" i was like face palm
Dear author,
Don't take this personally but wtf do you have against me? "is...is it in" I just walked away from the computer after this part. This chapter just tossed damn near every male sexual insecurity onto spike (i cant even say me lmao.) Not cool author, not cool.
love spike!
Lol sorry theres a reason my usernames awesome spike.. this chapter just made me so wanna do that.
Where's the epic facehoove button!! That line "is it in?" It's like dividing by zero!! I have to walk away from this and stroll in the blizzard happening outside my house.
Wow..... Just...... Twilight asked " is it in?"?..... Poor spike.... She just couldn't fake it like a good pony?.... Lolz
Is it in LOL XD Oh twilight your so...insensitive
? A dragon and a pony? Well love is still love!
Well cya! Gonna fight Majin-Buu!
I would shoot myself if a girl asked me if it was in .
greatest insult to a man's pride:
"Is it in?"
"is it in?" Boner POISON! that would just destroy any guy, i don't care how much someone tries to apologize, you just can't come back from that.
4846448 Yes, yes you can, return with, "I don't know..."
Love it. Fantastically done from two first-timer's points of view and even sweet. It shows Spike's youthful eagerness and the fact that Twilight can't learn everything from books.
Who wants to bet that was engineered by a certain purple unicorn?
How would Twilight throw you out? There’s a “massive wall” of snow outside the front door. I also don’t think Twilight’s cruel enough to throw you out the top-floor balcony.
4846448
Instant death there is no coming back from that