i like the story, but yea what all of a sudden made twilight change? I can even understand not wanting him to feel the loneliness again but still, that doesnt protect her feelings which seemed to change as well.
I call bullshit! I am thoroughly confused, that's hard to do, if Twilight really thought of spike as a little brother why would she kiss him? Does she have repressed feelings for him(doubt it), or is she just into that?
Ah. I remember this fanfiction..... the first one I ever read. This is what got me into fanfictions in the first place, which is why I thank you. Though this is nowhere near the best that I have ever read, it was at some point in time my favorite(and only ) fanfiction.
1814970 yea i know right? same here though, read this and it left you wanting to read more fanfiction... basically its the precursor to my reading fanfiction.
Y'know what, I'm not gonna touch the pacing or the logic. Instead I'm gonna fixate on something more nitpicky.
How on earth could spike possibly be cold blooded? First of all, dragons generate fire in their bodies. If they couldn't regulate their temperatures they'd die. Secondly, you ever seen a flying reptile? Warm blood is almost absolutely required for that kind of activity.
Finally, if he's cold blooded, warm clothes will do literally nothing. Bundling up only works if you generate body heat that can be retained.
3363292 I know that for the sake of the story, him being cold blooded was a necessary contribution, but I whole heartedly agree with your nitpickyness. Not that I don't love the story so far mind you!
*reads description*
Ho-ho-hooo, Man this is gonna be goooood.
(Not in that kinda way ya Filthy minded eediots)
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
lovely story so far <3
There isn't enough for this. Damn.
I like it, this is not like other Mature fics I've read and I like it.
I have read this story 1000000000000000000 times and I absolutely love it
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Man, reading a story one quintillion times is just pure raw dedication, wow.
can not tell you how many times i have read this story and i still love it
ECTOTHERMS DON'T SHIVER WHEN COLD! MAMMALS DO THAT TO REGULATE THEIR OWN BODY TEMPERATURE! SOOOOO AAANGRYYYY
really nice story though enjoyed it thoroughly
i like the story, but yea what all of a sudden made twilight change? I can even understand not wanting him to feel the loneliness again but still, that doesnt protect her feelings which seemed to change as well.
I call bullshit! I am thoroughly confused, that's hard to do, if Twilight really thought of spike as a little brother why would she kiss him? Does she have repressed feelings for him(doubt it), or is she just into that?
Ah. I remember this fanfiction..... the first one I ever read. This is what got me into fanfictions in the first place, which is why I thank you. Though this is nowhere near the best that I have ever read, it was at some point in time my favorite(and only ) fanfiction.
1814970
yea i know right? same here though, read this and it left you wanting to read more fanfiction... basically its the precursor to my reading fanfiction.
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Eeyup.
Y'know what, I'm not gonna touch the pacing or the logic. Instead I'm gonna fixate on something more nitpicky.
How on earth could spike possibly be cold blooded? First of all, dragons generate fire in their bodies. If they couldn't regulate their temperatures they'd die. Secondly, you ever seen a flying reptile? Warm blood is almost absolutely required for that kind of activity.
Finally, if he's cold blooded, warm clothes will do literally nothing. Bundling up only works if you generate body heat that can be retained.
Hmmmm hmmmm hmmmm
3363292 I know that for the sake of the story, him being cold blooded was a necessary contribution, but I whole heartedly agree with your nitpickyness. Not that I don't love the story so far mind you!
You'd expect a dragon, the FIRE-BREATHING CREATURE, to stay warm.
Nothing wrong with humping.