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Light Heart101


I'm just an autistic light hearted alicorn. I'll be writing emotional, comedic, and heartwarming stories.

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Twilight and her friends are overwhelmed by juggling their jobs, the school of friendship, and their friendship missions. So Twilight decides that they need to expand their staff. From ponies to dragons, from creatures trying to lead a normal life to mystical guardians, this school will never be the same.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 80 )

I think it is cool you talked about Dr. Wolf in this.

Favorite Brony. I thought I'd make the subtle reference.

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Again, the reply button. It's the little >> button. And, is this story actually published?

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chapter yes, story not yet.

No, I'm waiting until I'm done with the last chapters and am able to have them edited and proof read.

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I know. It's just something I'm not used to.

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Give me a month. I have a few more chapters to write. I have a friend who I asked to join the story. It should only be about three more chapters, then I'll be ready to publish.

Any antics that you might get into?- Discord

Wait, is that for Discord ?
or
From Discord ?

don't forget that FlashTruth can't lie, so some times he uses that fact to find out what he wants

Do you want me to tell you what my O.C.s think about the Mane 6 and the Young 6 ?

Fun Facts, the King of New-MoonRacer is a Pony-Dragon, Kirouac


p.s. We should get an image with all the O.C.s in this story

you know, FlashTruth was often asked to go help the kids that had AS where he lived (that's how he meat ShyStone and FastFox)
Does Golden Dash want to meat them ?

p.s. Is Golden Dash half dear ?

sens because Desert Rat is part Buffalo, can we have one of the students thing that he is FastFox's dad
and have her say that "Rat isn't my parent, FlashTruth is !"

p.s. who is Trail Dancer ?

If Golden Dash stell feels... about being a half breed, FlashTruth can point out that the king of New-MoonRacer, Kirouac, is a half breed

should Golden Dash be... reacting ?

He wore a RED jacket and a brown hat.

Waoh, it's Orange, not Red
p.s. His religion says that you shouldn't wear red

He also had a camera around his chest

Why does ever one...
look at this Image


P.S. there name are FastFox & ShyStone
not Fast Fox & Shy Stone
you can have them call jest part of there names, but there names are jest One word

But Flash truth, there's

and you forgot to give him a capitol T in FlashTruth


p.s. about humans, can we have them think Light Sparker is a Harpy that has no feathers
.
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and these are my friends

Why did he only called them friends ?
p.s. also, you should add a "( , )"


Wait, you have that FastFox wrote both of them ?
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Shy lowered her head. "MoonRacer."

What do you want to know about MoonRacer ?
p.s. it's jest on the top of the mountain, between the Pony-land and Bad-land


p.s. Shy only reads Daring Do, because it's the only book that FastFox would read out of her free will
she mostly read more down to earth, Slice of Life stories
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Fast Fox were starting to get along with the other kids.

she may.. run to meat them all

He had already scored 9 points in the first match.

Do I have to say ?

WOW! A talking fox! I've never seen one in person before, and you have wings! That's the coolest seen I've ever seen."

Umm...

Gave them to me and he's my group manager. They are all pretty cool to be honest, but don't expect me to do more than one at a time from here on out.

Oh... and there I was about to tell you about 5 more O.C.s that wanted to come to the school at the same time

Flash stepped forward. "I'm Flash Truth, and these are my... well, I guess you can call them my family,

Why isn't he saying Daughters ?

Flash acted rather nonchalant about it. "Oh, that's just my horseshoes. They are laced with some form of magic that allows me the levitate stuff and keeps me from lying."

it's more that it let's him conductor is magic through his his horseshoes, jest like a unicorn does with there horn
him not lying, and can't be lie to, has nothing to do with that.
Do you want me to P.M. this BackStory about that ?

Flash shrugged. "I just found them."

Do you really want to know ?

Changelings don't live in hot climates and aren't that far west."

they funny think is that.. there are Changelings in MoonRacer. And it's on top of a mountain..
p.s. What about Ocellus ?

"So, you all know each other pretty well."

Flash did call them his family, so...

. Flash nervously spoke. "Uh, yes. We have know each other for a few years now and we are pretty close friends."

Why isn't FastFox that says that ?

"Well, there's a couple of kids I'd race back in MoonRacer. Uh... I... Eh..."

Didn't I have there name ?
Speed, Sleipnir, Fenrir (Fenrir is Sleipnir's dog)

When Twilight brought up your list of friends his eyes widened and his head tilted to one side.

the funny think is that most of the time, they can't see his eyes because he has his sunglasses on

five secants

Do you mean seconds

Fox eventually sat next to her.

Do you mean "Want next to her"
p.s. Maybe we can add that FlashTruth told them to mingle with the other student, jest before he finds out that they aren't going to be with him for the first class.

she heard someone sit next to her

Maybe it should be
She heard someone else sit next to her

. I have to say that I've never met a dragon before and you look so cool! What's your name?"

umm... Kirouac is half dragon
. I have to say that I've never met a pureblood dragon before and you look so cool! What's your name?"
or
. I have to say that I've never met a bipedal dragon before and you look so cool! What's your name?"

Applejack

Should we make a joke about that Applejack has an Orange coat and a hat
will FlashTruth has a Orange cote and a hat

As everybody stood in silence a few tears ran down Fox's cheek. Her playful nature seemed to be disintegrated my Light's relentless onslaught. As she tried to wipe the tears from her eyes she started to speak softly. "I didn't want to lose my family. When Flash said that he wanted to apply here I didn't want to think about what would happen if he left us. I didn't want to lose him, but I couldn't leave Shy behind. So I decided to apply both of us for the job. I didn't want to hurt anypony. I'm sorry!"

Should be by.

Flash shrugged. "My teacher gave them to me."

well, it's like his magical wand, in Harry Potter, don't need to do magic, but it helps
no need to change

Changelings are welcome here and if you were just a spy I would have known by the dirt on your hooves. Trust me."

w..What ?
is that a joke ?

pegecorn

do you mean pegAcorn

don't know which on is the dog

How would he know that one's a dog
oh and p.s. Sleipnir, and Fenrir.

reads more

oh... ok.

his eyes widened and his head tilted to one side. Even though he his shades on I could see the crease on his forehead.

Good job

Flash thought you were being truthful till

Will FlashTruth was told that they helped one and other with the writing, so they didn't need his help
he thought that it was jest ShyStone helped with the writing faster
and they seed the letter before he could see it, telling him that they are "big girls" now (which wasn't a lie per say)

Fox eventually decided sat down next to her.

I stell think it should be "Want next to her"

Fox was the one at the end of the row

Fox want to the end of the row ?

Fox leaned over to Shy.

wait... how far are they from one and other ?

golden glow started emanating from the violin.

did he get is C.M. ?

Astral Mythos

p.s. MoonRacer don't uses money
so if you want to make a joke or something about that, go a head

As Shy lowered her head a bit Fox ran over to him. "Come on, Shy here would make a great librarian, and where wouldn't you need me. You can't break up apart!"

Should be us.

They didn't have too hard of a time finding the school, whenever Fox wasn't running around. Eventually they made their way into the school. Shy looked like she was trying to walk trough a mind field trying to keep a safe distance from all of the kids. Flash had a hard time trying to keep track of both of them. Soon they made their way to Twilight's office.

Ok, missing a comma on eventually. Trough should be through. And mind should be mine.

Fox's eyes widened as he jumped onto Light. "Wow! You are the coolest thing I've ever seen!"

She.

Light found his calm attitude about the artifact rather disturbing. "Well, I am familiar with artifacts that work a magic conductors, but how did you find those?"

as.

Light raised an eyebrow. "I don't know which on is the dog, but he doesn't count. I can tell you had a race with them before you left MoonRacer and I'm finding three bits of hair on you that were probably from a hug. I can't place a sheer bet on two of them, but I can easily pick out the dog hair. Don't go trying to say it's a dimond dog, their hair isn't that short. So you have two on the list, tell me more. While you're at it name some of Shy's friends."

one. diamond.

Light walked back to the desk. "I'm sorry for interrupting, but I started to notice a few problems here. I decided to get an idea of Flash's body language while he was talking and got a baseline for him. When Twilight brought up your list of friends his eyes widened and his head tilted to one side. Even though he his shades on I could see the crease on his forehead. My bet is that most of your friends are the ones in this room. Of course that's not the main problem I found. I was looking over Twilight's shoulder and I saw the applications you turned in. The writing on two of them matched. Fox and Shy. My guess is that Fox filled out Shy's application, and the look on her face just gave it away." Everybody turned to see Shy Stone with her head lowered. Light didn't let up. "I do believe that Flash thought you were being truthful till now, but I believe half-truths can fly under the radar. Here's my question for you. Who would you fill out an application for a kid whose an obvious introvert who most likely didn't want the job and lie on your own application? At this point you'd make a better student than a teacher."

Ugg. these all need commas. And. the italicized part should be he has his shades on. And whose should be who's.

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I'm making a copy of all of my stories on google docs. I have requested a editor to help, but I'd like you to help as well if you want. From now on can you PM me the edits?

"Hey, aren't you a little young to be in this school?"

How old is he ?

Did your dad teach you how to be super smart, or did your mom teach you?"

p.s. ShyStone and FastFox don't have a mother

but I have a new dad. His name is Heat Wave."

, but I understand that their current father isn't their first.

p.s. FlashTruth is the only parent that they can recall
Do you want there story

Astral took a deep breath as he set everything down. "You made me think about how much time I put into my writing. I know it's my job, and it isn't a bad thing to do, but I'm realizing how much of the world around me I am missing. I'm still writing stories, but I need to make time for me to live. Maybe it'll help my stories in the long run, but maybe it will help me more. I only have one life, and I need to make the most of it."

funny thing This is almost why FlashTruth isn't a doctor

They both got the kids together and started the game.

Who is in who's team
and What bass are they on ?

Fell free to ship FlashTruth.

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Who's on first, what's on second, and I don't know is on third.

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wait, What
*read it again*

Who is in who's team
and What bass are they on ?

oh L :rainbowlaugh: L

ok, but who which pony is the pisher, the batter, and the Left and Right fild ?

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This is a decent sized school. Astral is the pitcher, but they cycle through the batters and catchers.

If you want you can have FlashTruth ask him to make wings for CloudBusters
or
Shark-Puncher

How is it that I haven't released the story yet, and it already has 125 views?

Do you want to know what FlashTruth and his daughers would like for there B-day ?


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That would be me, always going back each day to see what you have added

When ShyStone sees Light Heart: doesn't see waht's the big deal with him having a horn and wings

FastFox sees Light Heart, "Are you Farmer's brother (you don't have to use xe, xem, xyr)

You misspelled "application" as "aplication" in the chapter "Light Heart".

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