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Crystal Charm
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It's quite a clever idea for a story, I like it so far, keep going!
Dark alternate steampunk universe where the three pony tribes are still separated? Colour me interested.
This is original...
Woot, woot! All abroad the steampunk train!
Seems a bit fast and where you stopped the chapter seems kind of off. Have a fav.
Huh. Interesting, steampunk! I like steam.
I dropped by to tell you: Capitalize! It helps your story be read and noticed.
The Age of Steam: Rise of the Earth Ponies
Yay~ Another chapter!~
One thing, I noticed an overuse of her and she especially in the first two paragraphs.
Why does Luna still speak in old equestrian? Was she banished in this universe too?
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Yea i have this problem with repeating myself. And to Raistlin no she was not banished. Luna is a protector and relic of the past; she represents the earlier times and protects them, which could be justified via the night being related to darkness and mystery. Celestia's light removes these shrouded aspects, while Luna's night shrouds them and protects them, which explains why Luna would be more inclined to the past, particularly the use of language.
Will there ever be another chapter?
Its gonna kick off soon i hope