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Paul is back!

Life hasn't become any easier for him—he still has a job at the hospital—but it sure has become more exciting. He's practically surrounded by women who are interested in the mare who is sometimes content to just play with their breasts for hours on end.

This story should be updating every 2-3 months (it's on a monthly writing schedule, but it needs more than one month worth per chapter) basically "When it's done."

Please, everyone, sit down and get comfortable, this is going to be quite the ride.

—Damaged

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Yay!

i'll just wait for the new update, for a meanwhile Have a like!

Comment posted by karnazom deleted Jan 21st, 2019

Paul what if you did get pregnant

More of Paul's unfortunate shenanigans? Awesome!

Ask Cadance: Do you know there is a pony in your sister-in-law's town that might rival you in romantic talent?

Boobs are better than butt. Fact.

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I won't say I'm happy wit the expected schedule, but I'm definitely curious about more stories in this universe.

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Heresy! Butts are absolutely superior!! :flutterrage:

9416202 It was honestly a struggle taking this one on at all. At the moment I have 3 commissioned stories a week I write for (sometimes 4), and have 5 monthly commissioned slots as well as 2 free monthly slots (where I let my patrons vote for what I write).

On the plus side, I enjoy writing. :twilightsmile:

9415774 Paul supports this with the backing of both penis and vagina.

9415413 Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

I'm going to pass on this, but that description made me laugh enough.

9416232 Not even one little bit? It's waffer thin...

Nah, it's all good. No pressure. Glad to have made you giggle just a little! :pinkiehappy:

Unironically a great story!

I almost forgot I was following the story

9447556 :pinkiegasp: But the silliness must be increased!

Paul what will you if you do end up with a foal

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And the silliness shall increase with a party cannon. No not that one the other one. No the other other one Yes that one

9447602 Th-That one? But it—Oh gosh! :pinkiehappy:

Reading this chapter make me realized I forgot something.

Ask Applejack: I haven't seen you so I have to ask. Consider the current affair in Ponyville. Do you also get great-grandchildren for Granny Smith?

9447987 I like this question so much I'll answer it right here!


"What 'n Tarnation? Now, Ah don't know if you realize this, but I'm a woman. An' don't go thinkin' for a second Ah'd do some of that new-fangled stuff like Lyra Whatsit in town." Applejack seemed to calm a little after she was done with her mini tirade. "Big Mac on the other hoof..."

Behind Applejack, a very stocky red mare stood beside a gray-furred woman with her hair half covering her face. Marble had her arm around McIntosh's neck and gave her lover a squeeze.

Applejack sighed. "Let's just say the weddin's on Tuesday."

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I want to see this as a plot point at some time now. Oh the drama

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I can see Cadence's reply: My talent is in regards to love, both the emotions and the actions thereof. Paul is mearly talented in ensuring the next generation of our country will be numerous and plentiful.

Ask Twilight: Dear Princess. I notice that you came out of the closet in public recently. Why were you spying on those two?

"Well, it was just after I'd tried to find some problems to fix, and ended up enslaving half the town with mind-control magic, then I used time travel to warn myself not to time travel—that didn't work—

ROFL

Putting her actions into words shows just how much growth she still has to do :-)

Celestial why are you trying to have a foal.

Side question why don't you want a foal

Awe I wanted to see Paul get pregnant. Still interesting to read

"Yeah. Guys said he had half of Ponyville pregnant before the first baby was born. While I'd rather he took his nose out of my wife's bust, I certainly won't complain if he can help us." It was the guard from earlier who'd acted extra weird.

Ask Shining Armor: Since you seem to have trouble getting your wife pregnant, why don't you let her change you into Gleaming Shield and carry the foal in her place? I am sure you wife would love the idea nonetheless.

9489837 Being the male in the relationship, Shining IS the mare who will carry Cadance's foal anyway. :twilightblush:

Prince Luna: If you got Paul to drunkily consent, would you put a foal in her?

Ask Luna: So you don't find Paul attractive at all?

Paul what's in the water for the huge increase in sexual activity. Side note I'm concerned that you may end up with foal with the amount of sex you have especially with your special talent

Blueblood:

As a favor for having Paul help with you and her having a foal, would you allow Tia to put one in him?

For Paul:

If you were in season, who would you have mount you? It is clear that you are becoming more open

I almost didn't notice Twilight fall out of my closet when I was walking out. Life was certainly complicated.

For Twilight: What does you particular fond of the closet's top? I thought bed is softer and more comfortable.

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Maybe some random chick at a bar

For ponyville how's the pregnancy population doing? I hope they are progressing smoothly

including an alternate dimension version of me that's even dorkier

Human Applejack: Wow, Twi, ah don't think ah could be more honest than the alternate version of yers.
Sci-Twi: I-I'm not that bad, okay!
Dog-Spike: Relax, Twi, she must mean you are the one who wear glasses.
Sci-Twi: Not helping, Spike.

Ask Sci-Twi: Did you know your alternate self can switch gender?

And once again Paul revolutionizes pony lovemaking. I wonder how long it'll take for such spells to become commonplace and him to be hauled as a "friendship hero" through the kingdom :trollestia:
Twiggles is certain to thank him properly in a place he can truly appreciate her wondrous breasts, that's for sure!

Paul: If you were in season, who would you have mount you? It is clear that you are becoming more open

"Not bloody Twilight Sparkle!" I shouted. "I mean, I know he was a bit excited, and I kinda was too—and not that I'm really complaining—but I asked him to keep it out of my pink!"

This sounds a lot like someone changing his mind in the middle of a sentence, to be honest. I wonder if he wouldn't do it after all.

Lyra how's life with bon bon since the pregnancy?

Ask Princess Twilight: What is the average age the ponies in Equestria have their first experience?

Ask Rainbow Dash: Haven't heard much of in this series, but is it safe to assume that you're the breeding stallion that Paul is?

Ask Twilight: How does it feel to have made a successful workaround to Discords curse? And will you publish all the new spells you and Paul are coming up with?

I got nothing that already hasn't been asked

Pinkie pie how are the baby showers going

Celestia: Are the Changelings still a problem/ did Discord's curse effect them as well?

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