Oh hey its back.

“Come on Gar-Gar, let’s go talk to this Richard thing.” Garble let his younger sister drag him to Ember’s hoard, really not wanting wanting to meet Richard again.

The word has been doubled.

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Whoops, might have missed that, thanks for pointing that out.

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Nothing other than it coming off as too Gary Stu to me with it being a blue dragon and the intended love intrest being Ember.

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Hmm, I can see how someone can see that. But that won't be the case, at least, I won't try and make it that case.

Okay I've never actually watched any of the series I became a fan because of the fandom but is smolder really his sister

John's team have made a new HR suit that can withstand the heat of a volcano, but not magma or lava, for an extended amount of time that is.

What's the difference, in terms of heat?

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Watch this clip

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Copied and pasted this from a site. Link can be found here.

Bright red lava flows in Hawaii can get as hot as 1,165 F, with the glowing orange flows getting hotter than 1,600 F, according to USGS.
And when rock is seriously melting, such as the magma within the Hawaiian volcano of Kilauea, it can reach 2,120 F, according to USGS.

The HR suit in my story is meant to protect the wearer from temperatures above red hot lava, but not orange hot lava. And since Richard came into contact with Magma, the suit stood little chance.

I hope to see a new chapter really soon

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Really? I don't think it's that good. Compared to other works, this is barely anything. Why do you think it's so good?

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Actually, I love the hate comments. They give insight into what I might be doing wrong and whenever I go back and read through it myself, I find them to be right. Even after a few years now of writing, I am still a beginner. If anything, I doubt myself most of the time. I read so many great stories and whenever I compare my work to their's, mine is trash.

No and, if, or, buts about it. Their is so much more to writing than just, Beginning, Middle, End. No, their is world building, character development, character relate-ability, making an arc, so much more than what people think. Yet, no one realizes it. They seem a title that looks interesting. They read the summary. They read the book. And when all is said and done, their reaction is 'Amazing story', 'meh, could be better', or 'Why did I even think this was interesting?'. Being a writer is hard. Not because of the criticizers, but the making of the story itself.

Anyone can have an idea, but building on it, that's the hard part. I have hundreds of ideas everyday. But when I try to build on them, they just fall apart like a Lego build crashing to the floor. The few I have posted were the ones that stayed together. But the deleted stories are the ones that fell apart.

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By the way, you do realize you just called me, 'A complete jerk.', right?

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Yep. Also, all the other Ember x human stories skip to the clop and that's it. This story was actually requested by someone. I'm just the guy making it. There will be clop, but that will be at the end of the story. I also plan for Rick to meet the ponies as well.

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Dear author when's the next update coming.

Liking this.

This was a awesome chapter it's awesome how he showed he is no punk. I hope he makes a herd with Ember and Smolder.

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The area around the magma chamber is actually not all that hot, as the ground absorbs most of the heat, but its still hot enough to kill someone. There's also the gases you have to worry about, so likely its merely designed to keep the wearer alive in the chamber itself, but isn't good enough to keep them alive for long if they were to fall into the Lava Pool.

Why did he survive attack?