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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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Babs Seed grew up never knowing her father. Now, with her wedding to Twist fast approaching, she finally managed to find out who and where he is. It's a big step in her life, to finally meet the stallion that helped bring her into the world.

One she's not sure she's ready for.

(This story is based on MustLoveFrogs's Junior Gala universe and written with permission.)

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Comments ( 6 )

I love to see a second part Trouble Shoes confronting that bitch of a mare, and maybe leaving something to remind her what she used to be and what she become.

Beautiful. There are a few missing words but overall, a solid story.

Beautiful. I loved their interactions, how you got their emotions across so well. Bravo!

Sucker that I am for Frog's work, this immediately appealed to me.

Then I didn't read it for two weeks. :twilightsheepish:

In any case, I'm glad I finally did. The beginning drags a bit more than you likely intended, but the emotional core of the story is deep and strong. Excellent work in the interaction, the turmoil, and the relief. Thank you for it.

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