Stories with no villain, no build up or over arcing story. Just exerpts of moments in the lives of the ponies that changed equestria.
Author Note: Since I did not have a really description for this I figured I could explain my thoughts on this.... project. I am one of those who loves to write and have many MANY ideas but none that ever link together or have any story between them, juts short and sweet moments that just intrest me. I figure it could be fun to test my creative writing skills and share these stories with this wonderful site!
Chapters (1)
A nice short snippet with a good flow to it, a plethora of details and an awesome atmosphere. Though I have to say, I’d appreciate if the story was split into more smaller paragraphs as the current state is rather hard on the eyes. Also noticed quite a lot of typos and other errors—can help you comb for them, if you wish.
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Hey! Thank you so much! This was one of my first partial stories I had cooked up, and just kinda rushed it into writing. One of those "just do it now and you won't forget it later" kinda moments. Life kinda got in the way and that is why there is only one story here almost a year later. But I am back, more or less! To be 100% honest I just wrote the whole thing out and then just spaced things out where I felt it was a decent break in what was happening. Spelling errors and typos I can comb through and fix those, I should have in the first place but, lazy kicked in!
But if you are willing advice on breaking up paragraphs would be greatly appreciated!
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You’re welcome! If this is your idea of a ‘rushed’ story, then you are a pretty good writer :D Anyway, I’ll track it and look forward to the next chapters.
Well, first and foremost, it depends on how you ‘feel’ it should be broken up. So, technically, two people may not agree on the best way of splitting a paragraph. However, there are still a few general rules that you can follow:
There should be just one core idea of a paragraph. If it starts with A, it should be just about A, not about A, B, C, D and E.
The ideal length of a ‘bite-sized’ paragraph is about 3 – 4 sentences of medium length. Occasionally you can go both below and above this limit.
Paragraph length can also be adjusted to help the story’s pacing. Shorter paragraphs—faster pace. Longer ones—slower pace.