"Where was the snoring? Or if she had woken up, where where the sounds of her moving around or breathing?"
I'm sure you mean "where were" if I'm not mistaken.
Btw, I've never found a story that make me shake my fists with a big smile on my face at some of the little moments in this story. I've fallen in love with fanfics before, but never had I found one that made me so absurdly eager to keep reading. Heck, I even thought that reading a story in the perspective that it already happened felt weird. Past-tense isn't even my cup of tea, but I identified how well it fits for narration so much to the point that I hardly even care anymore. Thank you so much for writing this!
The dragon killing Ludewig was not surprising given how much contempt he had for the griffon I was expecting that outcome. I'm pretty sure Danger took the collar as well given that's what started this whole thing. It's nice that Danger left at least a note.
Alright, another round of cuddling and drinking before I go to sleep! Good thing I got something special for this!
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So what do you think about the newest chapter?
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Fixed, thanks again
its missing the E in future in the title of the chapter
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Fixed, thanks
Anything about the content you like to share too?
"Where was the snoring? Or if she had woken up, where where the sounds of her moving around or breathing?"
I'm sure you mean "where were" if I'm not mistaken.
Btw, I've never found a story that make me shake my fists with a big smile on my face at some of the little moments in this story. I've fallen in love with fanfics before, but never had I found one that made me so absurdly eager to keep reading. Heck, I even thought that reading a story in the perspective that it already happened felt weird. Past-tense isn't even my cup of tea, but I identified how well it fits for narration so much to the point that I hardly even care anymore. Thank you so much for writing this!
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You know how to make an author happy
Thank you for making such a kind comment, I am glad the 'little moments' worked for you.
I will correct the errors you pointed out when I am back at my PC.
I just knew it! Such a crafty pony. I really like what you did with Lucia. I'll be sad not to see her again. Keep up the good work!
This was a sad chapter I hope Lucia find someone who will love her right.
Dang, I really wanted the dragon to go up to Danger and be like,”Hey, I killed most of your entourage, my bad.”
That’s also OOC for the both of them, so that’s not going to happen.
The dragon killing Ludewig was not surprising given how much contempt he had for the griffon I was expecting that outcome. I'm pretty sure Danger took the collar as well given that's what started this whole thing. It's nice that Danger left at least a note.
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Well, good nose of yours then! Some people expect it, some don't.
I am pretty sure that will be adressed in the story again