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Bucket of Skies


Author with a bucket of ideas

Comments ( 24 )

Before I read this, I must know: Can Red Velvet use his blood as a weapon?

Ill give it a shot

Took me a bit, but i picked up on the reference. Then everything clicked in place.

Damn. I called thr suicide attempt. The signs pointed to it a couple of chapters back.

Yay! This so feel good i Love it.

This was a really nice chapter. I think...I'm gonna stop reading, for now, on this one. Because I saw the bad signs in this chapter. The last thing i want to do is ruin my night with some horrible thing that comes afterwards.

Yay! I love the story! Keep it up!

9951073
Plz keep reading. Plzzzzz :fluttershysad:
I cant make any promises, but give it a chance

9944222
Don't mind starlight nova; a bit of a troll.
I'll give this a read tonight and let you know what I think. If I make it all the way, great. If I don't, then I'll let you know why. 😑

9954073
I'm still not done with the story so.....yeah you wont make it to the end lol

9954076
I know that, it clearly states that. I will read to where your are now.

So is this a blatant self insert, or a veiled one?
:P

I'm a few chapters in and the constant human life with the minor pony overlay is really confusing.
They use American dollars, eat meat, use the same tech with slight pony changes, the music, games, systems...

It's a total alt reality where ponies are actually humans on pony earth crossover?

It's okay, but it's not to immersive. But I'll keep on

Yay to the pro movement... But what creature in their right or wrong mind would "drive" someone to a different city and back in an impossible carriage, and say "I don't want money, just hang out with me."
That's the start of a horrible murder/rapey night talk.

Ach, I'm sorry, I made it this far, but the story just isn't gripping.
Good effort, though.

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And right before the good stuff happens. I'm a little hurt

10039380
At least give my other stuff a try if you give up on this

Oi ya bastard, made me tear up a bit. Well done.

This is the most unexpected yet wholesome story I ever read. At first I was thinking this would just be your typical Griffin X Pony fic with no development in it. Boy I was wrong.

In my opinion, it was structured well, developed well, and the way the story progressed was great. Character's actions were all reasonable, their development was good to watch, and the actions and thoughts they have showed was fitted well to the story. The world structure combined with some real stuff (cash, PC, food, etc) wasn't big of a deal to look at since this fitted well too.

This story will probably be one of my most memorable and favorite stories I read, makes me wonder why many people didn't read it yet.

Kudos to you!

10517335
Thanks man, the support is appreciated!

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