Josh wakes one day in his house setteled in the mountains and decides to go for a hike. He finds a cave while hiking and it Transports him to the magical land of Equestria. He meets The Mane Six and through adventures with them discovers why each pony is there own Element of Harmony. But when he goes with Twilight Sparkle to discover the power of magic he discovers his fate. Will he save Earth and leave Equestria and his new friends to die? Or will he forsake Earth to allowshis friends to live? Will he die in an attempt to save both worlds? Read and find Out!
P.S. this is my very first fanfic so i hope i did good.
Chapters (3)
You're story is all in all really good plot sentence structure is good, but you have slightly rushed the first par of the story i think a human would be far more weary of talking magical horses. Hope to see a update soon
I've written my on fic with similar idea but more futuristic you should read it if you get a chance
I'm interested to see where this leads.
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Thnx for the comment. I should be finished with part two by tuesday or wednssday
I have finished Part 2. Enjoy!