Kamili, a young zebra, has grown up in poverty in Manehattan all of his life. After dropping out of high school, he was only getting by working as a partner to his brother's drug operations. But, after barely escaping a hostile attack by enemies of his older brother, he has a chance to start over.
I came up with this idea on a whim one day and thought it'd made a good first stab into the wonderfully weird world of fanfiction. I hope you enjoy!
Is there a reason why, at least to me, this story sounds like the plot to an Equestria Girls story?
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What do you mean by that?
I really like the describing! I also like the storyline, it’s interesting.
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Thanks for checking it out!
Not bad so far, but the conversations are somehow a little bit... off? Hard to explain.
The story itself is interesting.
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It may just be the way that I write, I'm an amateur, after all.
Hope that doesn't stop you from enjoying the story!
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No, I am really curious about what will happen.