Through a Mirror Darkly

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This story is a sequel to Timeless

After sacrificing her world, Pinkamena knew that it would be difficult adjusting to a new Equestria. But she never expected herself - or rather this Equestria's version of herself - to be so difficult.

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Chapter 1 · 23rd Nov 2018 · 1,315 words
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Chapter 2 · 23rd Nov 2018 · 1,028 words
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Chapter 3 · 23rd Nov 2018 · 1,825 words
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Chapter 4 · 23rd Nov 2018 · 216 words
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The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #1 · Nov 24th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 4 ·

To be honest, while this was good, it would have probably worked better as a longer story in my opinion.

Dreadnought

Dreadnought #2 · Nov 24th, 2018 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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Honestly, I would have preferred to make Timeless a longer story. But alas, time was short and I wrote what I could. As for this story, I was just happy to have the time to write as much as I did.

Dreadnought

Huk

Huk #3 · Nov 25th, 2018 · · · Chapter 4 ·

It felt like the beginning of something much longer... The ending was a bit bittersweet for me due to lack of completion (I realize that was probably intentional due to time constraints you mentioned)...

Anyway, good story - however, I'm not sure about the comedy tag... I found it more on the sad side - but perhaps that's only me.

-Pinkamena_Pie-

-Pinkamena_Pie- #4 · Nov 26th, 2018 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Hmmm...

Dreadnought

Dreadnought #5 · Nov 26th, 2018 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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Hmmm good, or Hmmm bad?

-Pinkamena_Pie-

-Pinkamena_Pie- #6 · Nov 26th, 2018 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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Well, I kind of remember that happening. So maybe hmmmm good?

Dreadnought

Dreadnought #7 · Jul 19th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter 4 ·

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Thanks for your interest. The original story, Timeless, was written quickly for a contest deadline. This story, on the other hand, was written over a much longer period of time. I felt I had an interesting story to tell and I wanted to be able to fully flesh it out.

I must admit that I have been kicking around a few ideas for another story in this series. The problem has been two-fold. First, I have a number of stories already in the process of being written (currently three). Second, I have a really great idea, but it is more of a part IV or part V. I feel there should be something in between that I should write before I introduce an unexpected twist. Well, I'm headed to BronyCon, so maybe I'll get some inspiration there.

Dreadnought

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