Fluttershy has just arrived in Ponyville. After warily exploring the town for a while, she sees her first blueberry plant. She picks the sweet fruit...
...and loses it.
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- Member Since 14th Apr, 2012
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Zytharros
Let the child inside alive. Leave all who would slay them far behind.
Zytharros
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I wasn't quite sure.
Thanks! Minor edits go!
The story was 'meh', and your style of writing is good. Write more, but preferably with a different topic...
Wonderfully descriptive and colourful writing style, and I loved the look inside poor Fluttershy's mind. Ah, the curse of crippling self doubt married to a vivid imagination. Been there ...
I thought this was delightfully silly.
The first thing I read was "The blueberry never asked for this". I mentally cracked up.
2446887 And then I finished the story. Bravo again, Zytharros! Btw, isn't this like the 8 millionth time you've seen me today? LOL but anyway, great story bro :D
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At least. Thanks again!
Twilight is still best smilepony.
I think Fluttershy's finally lost it.
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Maybe. Maybe not. She may have an irrational fear of blueberries brought on by an allergic reaction as a child.
...wait, that was me and the colour purple via grape juice.