It seems like it's going to be another normal day in Cartown for Putt Putt, until a malfunction at Mr. Firebird's lab sends him to another dimension, and transforms him from a talking car to a unicorn colt.
Everything is not as it seems though, and Putt Putt will have to make a choice that will effect him for the rest of his life...
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This is something random I came up with and may surprise you.
This was my childhood right here so I'll give this a chance.
Wow, thanks a LOT! I'd like to thank everyone in Cartown for helping me get all the things I needed. And Outback Al...
SCREW YOU.
Holy crap. This is the last crossover I expected to see while studying for a test, but it brings back so many memories.
I'm expecting this to be a wild ride.
I used to play the fuck out of putt putt joins the circus as a kid. I'm excited
Ok this is gonna get a lot of views, I'm sure. You fucking put Putt Putt on the front.
Other than slightly too fast pacing, was a damn good start. Usually with you see crossovers of little kids' shows the author lacks even the simplest grammar and the great wall of text is the result, keeping out the readers. Trump would approve of those.
No! You were supposed to be dead! Dead with the other relics from the dark ages like freddy fish, eggbert, and crazy drake. How are you still alive?!
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Glad to see so many comments! Makes me happy and it's been enough to get me to try and get chapter 1 done today!
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The magic of youtube. And this particular LP of the first four games
Wow, I haven’t seen this game in years! I might just revisit it soon now.
Putt Putt is the best part of my childhood I hope you finish the story.
That was a very nice Prologue. You write wonderfully, and you seem to really grasp these characters' personalities as well. It's a terrific start!
Putt Putt's mannerisms bring me back to when I was 5.
Please, dont stop, I nees more
Mate... my sides...
Well there be parts from the game in the story? Like random games, touching a pot to make it sing
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I considered it, and while I can say no to the games part, I may throw in at least one moment like that at some point.
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I would recommend to not stay away from game material since you can create funny moments for the MLP world to experience. Been watching a few videos of the games and I think weird things around makes since for Ponyville
all my childhood and nostalgia and I haven't even read it yet
Awesome chapter! Man, I wonder if Putt Putt is going to do... Like when he finds out they aren’t going to help him I would think he’ll leave to find someone else
Love the story so far, can’t wait for the next chapter so take the time to make adventure of a Car Time
PushingUpRoses is really nice LPer.
It's quite a joy to know that other people remember stuff like Skunny: Save Our Pizzas.
New chapter within a day???
Anywho, I’m liking that I’m seeing Lore into the story which is pretty interesting idea of what the CarWorld Origins. I think humans are responsible but the games don’t really show that so in a way it’s a cool mystery.
Hopefully our little car will get home soon.
When reading it again I think the reason why these silly ponies aren’t helping is that they don’t believe his story. Which after Discord, Nightmare Moon, and having a Princess move a Sun, they don’t believe in other worlds or dimensions.
Really they ain’t going to try to look for Cartoon it seems
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As stated, I was bored at home on a night I called off on :P
As for anything else... well, I don't want to spoil anything, but I can suggest one makes a note of the tags for the story, and pay close attention to this chapter and the next one.
PuttShy ship... I like it
Putt Putt gets a cutie mark? Oh dear...
Wait... Ok going to place a spoiler tag here just in case because a theory.
This chapter you’ve wrote as me wondering if the story is inspired by Wreck It Ralph? Like for example that Putt Putt world is base on a video game which could explain the confusion of like his parents because I don’t remember if they were mention but in a way it seems always he remembers the adventures from the games but not outside of it. That could explain about the dream because his world is a fantasy learning game for kids while somehow open a portal to MLP show/world? I’m wondering what happens when a pony goes to Cartown
But it’s just a theory... A Car Theory! Thanks for driving
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After a fashion, your on the right track, but no, this story wasn't inspired by Wreck It Ralph (I've never actually seen that movie) but it was inspired by a different point and click game from the late 2000's, and the only other hints I'll give there are that there's no joking around with why I have a Sad tag in it.
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I understand why... You didn’t see the movie yet. Go watch it! You’ll enjoy it
Okay that was one extra creepy dream sequence
Keep it coming
That ending...
Wait... So is Putt Putt a human baby with anmisa? (Hopefully I wrote that right)
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All shall be revealed soon. But I can say your getting warmer.
And the correc spelling is amnesia, but i cant fault because im typing on my phone right now and it acts up all the time.
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I wasnt planning on the chapter ending there, but then I realized it was too powerful to write anything more.
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Don't worry, I wasn't saying it was bad. It hits right in the feels.
Will we be seeing the rest of the main six too?
Ok , this is not quite what I originally expected form a Put Put crossover but heck I am intrigued!!
This has to be the most random story I've come across.
I’m sorry to say but this story isn’t right with me. Because instead of it being a cross over it’s more of a mental issue story which feels different from the beginning.
I’m not liking the whole not letting him go home and making everything fake for him when in the beginning it was completely different being more a real world.
You had a good start but it just isn’t working for me.
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I'm sorry to hear that, though I at least hope you end up sticking around for the last two chapters, as I do plan on having something, either an authors note or a blog post explaining why I went with what I did for those confused or unhappy with it.
And if you dont, thats also fine. I appreciate you being honest and appreciate the comments youve made for the story as it was what helped me keep going rather than losing interest and motivation.
Only this fandom can make a crossover with PutPut and make it this dramatic. XD Best decision of my life XD
Seriously keep up the good work buddy :)
Where’s the Number Munchers crossover?
Well, I finally got around finishing reading it and I was not disappointed. It is nice to see that Putt Putt is in better place now.
Thanks for the good story :)
I just realized. Where is Luna?
Who are the two beings in the last bit of this chapter?
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In real life, they're the people who created the Putt Putt series.
In this case, their proxies as the childs parents/relatives.
Jesus Putt Putt, you doing alright?
Oh wow I’m glad you made that reference. I actually played that game loads of times but only finished the whole story once.
Edit 9/9/2023:
Small brain!