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Rainbow Sparkle


My name is Cain, a person who loves writing and rping. Am also a writer on Furaffinity http://www.furaffinity.net/user/rainbowsparkle91/, come check me out!

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It seems like it's going to be another normal day in Cartown for Putt Putt, until a malfunction at Mr. Firebird's lab sends him to another dimension, and transforms him from a talking car to a unicorn colt.

Everything is not as it seems though, and Putt Putt will have to make a choice that will effect him for the rest of his life...

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This is something random I came up with and may surprise you.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 61 )

This was my childhood right here so I'll give this a chance.

Wow, thanks a LOT! I'd like to thank everyone in Cartown for helping me get all the things I needed. And Outback Al...

SCREW YOU.

Holy crap. This is the last crossover I expected to see while studying for a test, but it brings back so many memories.

I'm expecting this to be a wild ride.

I used to play the fuck out of putt putt joins the circus as a kid. I'm excited :pinkiehappy:

Ok this is gonna get a lot of views, I'm sure. You fucking put Putt Putt on the front.

Other than slightly too fast pacing, was a damn good start. Usually with you see crossovers of little kids' shows the author lacks even the simplest grammar and the great wall of text is the result, keeping out the readers. Trump would approve of those.

No! You were supposed to be dead! Dead with the other relics from the dark ages like freddy fish, eggbert, and crazy drake. How are you still alive?!

turlay faem masterpace

Glad to see so many comments! Makes me happy and it's been enough to get me to try and get chapter 1 done today!

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The magic of youtube. And this particular LP of the first four games

Wow, I haven’t seen this game in years! I might just revisit it soon now.

Putt Putt is the best part of my childhood I hope you finish the story.

That was a very nice Prologue. You write wonderfully, and you seem to really grasp these characters' personalities as well. It's a terrific start! :pinkiehappy:

Putt Putt's mannerisms bring me back to when I was 5.

Please, dont stop, I nees more :pinkiecrazy:

Squirming a bit, Putt Putt offered a bit of a sheepish smile as he said “I-I’ve uh, being a car, never had to do this but uh… how do I… how do I go?”

Mate... my sides...:rainbowlaugh:

Well there be parts from the game in the story? Like random games, touching a pot to make it sing :rainbowderp:

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I considered it, and while I can say no to the games part, I may throw in at least one moment like that at some point.

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I would recommend to not stay away from game material since you can create funny moments for the MLP world to experience. Been watching a few videos of the games and I think weird things around makes since for Ponyville :rainbowderp:

all my childhood and nostalgia and I haven't even read it yet :raritystarry:

Awesome chapter! Man, I wonder if Putt Putt is going to do... Like when he finds out they aren’t going to help him I would think he’ll leave to find someone else :rainbowderp:

Love the story so far, can’t wait for the next chapter so take the time to make adventure of a Car Time :trollestia:

Dan

PushingUpRoses is really nice LPer.

It's quite a joy to know that other people remember stuff like Skunny: Save Our Pizzas.

New chapter within a day??? :rainbowderp:


Anywho, I’m liking that I’m seeing Lore into the story which is pretty interesting idea of what the CarWorld Origins. I think humans are responsible but the games don’t really show that so in a way it’s a cool mystery.

Hopefully our little car will get home soon. :raritycry:

When reading it again I think the reason why these silly ponies aren’t helping is that they don’t believe his story. Which after Discord, Nightmare Moon, and having a Princess move a Sun, they don’t believe in other worlds or dimensions.

Really they ain’t going to try to look for Cartoon it seems :twilightangry2:

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As stated, I was bored at home on a night I called off on :P

As for anything else... well, I don't want to spoil anything, but I can suggest one makes a note of the tags for the story, and pay close attention to this chapter and the next one.

Putt Putt gets a cutie mark? Oh dear... :rainbowderp:

Wait... Ok going to place a spoiler tag here just in case because a theory.

This chapter you’ve wrote as me wondering if the story is inspired by Wreck It Ralph? Like for example that Putt Putt world is base on a video game which could explain the confusion of like his parents because I don’t remember if they were mention but in a way it seems always he remembers the adventures from the games but not outside of it. That could explain about the dream because his world is a fantasy learning game for kids while somehow open a portal to MLP show/world? I’m wondering what happens when a pony goes to Cartown

But it’s just a theory... A Car Theory! Thanks for driving :rainbowwild:

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After a fashion, your on the right track, but no, this story wasn't inspired by Wreck It Ralph (I've never actually seen that movie) but it was inspired by a different point and click game from the late 2000's, and the only other hints I'll give there are that there's no joking around with why I have a Sad tag in it.

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I understand why... You didn’t see the movie yet. Go watch it! You’ll enjoy it :pinkiehappy:

Okay that was one extra creepy dream sequence :rainbowderp:

That ending... :fluttercry:

:fluttercry: Wait... So is Putt Putt a human baby with anmisa? (Hopefully I wrote that right)

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All shall be revealed soon. But I can say your getting warmer.

And the correc spelling is amnesia, but i cant fault because im typing on my phone right now and it acts up all the time.


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I wasnt planning on the chapter ending there, but then I realized it was too powerful to write anything more.

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Don't worry, I wasn't saying it was bad. It hits right in the feels.
Will we be seeing the rest of the main six too?

Ok , this is not quite what I originally expected form a Put Put crossover but heck I am intrigued!!

This has to be the most random story I've come across.

I’m sorry to say but this story isn’t right with me. Because instead of it being a cross over it’s more of a mental issue story which feels different from the beginning.

I’m not liking the whole not letting him go home and making everything fake for him when in the beginning it was completely different being more a real world.

You had a good start but it just isn’t working for me.

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I'm sorry to hear that, though I at least hope you end up sticking around for the last two chapters, as I do plan on having something, either an authors note or a blog post explaining why I went with what I did for those confused or unhappy with it.

And if you dont, thats also fine. I appreciate you being honest and appreciate the comments youve made for the story as it was what helped me keep going rather than losing interest and motivation.

Only this fandom can make a crossover with PutPut and make it this dramatic. XD Best decision of my life XD
Seriously keep up the good work buddy :)

Where’s the Number Munchers crossover?

Well, I finally got around finishing reading it and I was not disappointed. It is nice to see that Putt Putt is in better place now.
Thanks for the good story :)

I just realized. Where is Luna?

Who are the two beings in the last bit of this chapter?

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In real life, they're the people who created the Putt Putt series.

In this case, their proxies as the childs parents/relatives.

Even as Putt Putt felt the strain in his antenna, accompanied by an ever increasing suction, he tried to maintain his smile in response to Mr. Firebird’s hopeless expression. He had to keep smiling… after all, if he kept smiling, everything would be okay in the end!

Jesus Putt Putt, you doing alright?

“Dear Putt Putt, I know the last time you came by didn’t end up going the way either of us would have expected, what with your belongings getting flung back in time, but I have a new device I think would really get your engine roaring. So come on down anytime you’re up for taking a look. Your Friend, Mr. Firebird.”

Oh wow I’m glad you made that reference. I actually played that game loads of times but only finished the whole story once.

The only thing he could know for certain was that he felt off.

Someplace not too far away, a certain pink pony said aloud,

Edit 9/9/2023:

This adventure was definitely going to be different from his earlier ones.

“But that's impossible! Time travel isn't scientifically possible!” Twilight let out a groan and thumped her head on the table. She frowned and added as an afterthought, “And so are dimensional portals.”

Small brain!

She said as she nodded to each, then turned her head to Putt Putt.

Twilight squirmed a bit at that, but then said,(—— “I know you said he seemed to believe

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