Don't Hurry Back, Darling!

Rarity must beg for Sunset Shimmer's forgiveness. But can the awful things she said ever be forgiven?

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clubbzz

clubbzz #1 · Nov 11th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I always did like this particular ship.

An Asian Brony

An Asian Brony #2 · Nov 12th, 2018 · 5 · ·

Darling, how can I not feel guilty? The spell didn’t make me say that, it just made me forget that we had become friends.

Oooh, that's actually a really good point

Isseus

Isseus #3 · Nov 12th, 2018 · 5 · ·

Upvoted just for the term "marshmelodrama".

Dave Bryant

Dave Bryant #4 · Nov 12th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Yes, “marshmelodrama” of itself was enough to catch my attention and curiosity. Upvote and placement on the “recommended” bookshelf.

PoemeMystique

PoemeMystique #5 · Nov 12th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Thank you to all who take the time to upvote and/or comment.

LucarioFan2066

LucarioFan2066 #6 · Nov 12th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I would like to see a second chapter, where the two actually confess their feelings for each other, but this is mighty fine regardless.

Victoria_the_dragoness

Victoria_the_dragoness #7 · Nov 13th, 2018 · 3 · ·

Excellent; I truly enjoyed the movie that this is based on, so to see a bit of a sequel, explaining at least a possible aftermath from Rarity's outbursts, I suppose.

You make good points from the movie and I would feel guilty and inconsolable about saying such things in Rarity's place, even with the spell. I do love how Sunset thinks that her melodrama is cute, yet doesn't show it to prevent hurting her unintentionally. Again, I would do the same.

I loved the end bit too and I saw it arriving. It appears as if the amaranth and gold haired lady isn't the only lady with some hidden feelings, yet it appears that Rarity may know something of Sunset's for her.

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