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Lonely Fanboy48


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After the interrogates Pinkie did to Spike, her yelling made him completely scarred for life that he refuse to be part of Pinkie Pie's party. Pinkie was confused but when she remembers what she did to Spike, she feels regretful and tries to cheer Spike up.

Thanks to MoJoK20X for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/221451/MoJoK20X

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Comments ( 12 )

An interesting concept, but the presentation is kinda... stunted? A lot of it was just one question after another, and that doesn't really flow very well.

I feel like I've read his before

FRIENDSHIP FRIENDSHIP FRIENDSHIP FRIENDSHIP!!!

They never did address Pinkies behaviour to Spike in the episode. Nice to see this story address it and have two characters grow from it.

Is this supposed to be an 'outrageous' misunderstanding?

9356758
Well, seeing as it is the TITLE of your story that's misspelled, I'd imagine getting it right should be a priority. I mean, if you don't care enough to put the effort into getting it right, why should I care enough to read your sloppy work?
Basically, if you can't spell the title right, it tends screams volumes about the quality of the content within.

9356762
No. Tis an observation and criticism.
As a reader, I immediately think this story cannot be very good since the author could not be bothered to spell the title correctly is basically what I'm saying.

9356771
It’s fixed. Just please don’t judge a story by its title.

9356773
You're completely missing the point. I am judging the story by the author's inability to spell the title correctly. or in this case, your casual indifference towards why spelling is important. Spelling and grammar are key components to writing and understanding a story. If your readers can't understand what you're trying to get across, you've failed entirely as a writer and a storyteller.

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