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Pony Grove


I am nopony.

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One summer night, a city is struck by a very unusual occurrence. Two percent of the nearly one million occupants are turned into ponies. Talking, colourful, seemingly magical ponies. With no explanation and no recourse, they are forced to live very unique lives.

This is the story of April, a savvy secretary who woke up one morning as a pony, and her friend, Courtney, who is there to assist her in getting her life back on track.

Things are a mess as April gets ready to try to go out into the city and make a new friend, Kevin, who is another victim of The Change. April needs a new friend in her life, but can they both stand up to the everyday hardships of being ponies? Their similarities and differences will either make them... or break them.

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Comments ( 5 )

I applaud you, dear Author. Bravo. My heartstrings have been plucked, and i adore you for it.

Great story. Really needs a different cover art though as that's very misleading.

There is nothing that I... Wait, there is.


Thank you.

Thank you for writing this.

I love it.

Wholesome.

  • cream-coloured coat, a long mane and tail both deep burgundy, and bright sky-blue eyes
  • lavender/grey coat, long white mane and tail, yellow eyes

If I had access to the old Pony Creator app, I would make representations of them. Maybe if I ever find it again, I'll do that and edit this comment.

Was Courtney manipulating the jukebox songs herself? Was she secretly nearby?

Also, what about people who changed in the middle of the night who work all night? People with night jobs, or insomnia and weren't able to sleep? Or people who go to bed late, or wake up really early? When did they change, and what was it like? Was the change instantaneous (less than a second)? Did it take 10 seconds? A minute? An hour?

And never mind the TV show MLPFiM, does Equestria exist in this universe? Will Twilight Sparkle make an appearance in the future and apologize even if it's not her fault? Will she offer to try to come up with a way to transform back anyone who wants it?

Here are the three songs featured in this story:

  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lXgkuM2NhYI
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ujNeHIo7oTE
  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_MjCqQoLLA

Just a few spelling errors throughout the story. May I suggest running the whole thing through Grammarly? That's probably the fastest way to catch those things.

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