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Olivine Ellva


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awsome! will be favoriting this!

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What. The fuck...?

I-I... Guess it was good?

ok the was... nice? well written too

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I suppose I apologize for the sheer randomness of the whole concept.
I'm a little bit of a nutjob when it comes to this stuff, I guess.

Funny and hot! I love how Fluttershy was :fluttershyouch: whereas Pinkie the breaker of fourth walls was :pinkiesmile:

Well written but the right emotion to convey is still a mystery.

1026908 you don't need to say your sorry. i liked it (for different reasons). its just i've never read a clop before. :ajsmug:

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Second ever clop-fic. (I really need to go back to that other one, I'm taking way too many breaks from it)
So I'm not truly mastered in the art at all. And the other clop fic only has one clop scene thus far, and it was
done with tentacles. And I did try to convey some emotion in it, but tentacles are a very wild and generally
non-sensual erm... fetish?

VERY GOOD!

Also, PINKIE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! As expected.... :pinkiecrazy:

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That ain't nothing. I mean... Fluttershy phased her plot right through the wall. Amirite?

wait what derp :derpyderp1::pinkiehappy::yay:

3D MLP? Better call in Ask-TheCrusaders so he can do this for real!

Edit: MOAR!

this concept is revelant to my interests.........CARRY on

Pinkie breaks the wall again!

I... What...

My mind is... jumbled because of this. :applejackconfused:

This is new. I'll fav this.

I Favorited this because it was one of the few clopfics that actually turned me on...
But all in all, Nice spelling and grammar, plot is well stated, and VERY descriptive on the sex scenes.
I approve. :moustache:

ok ood job ya got me hooked on this one as well.:ajbemused:
cheers:twilightsmile:

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Why isn't this marked as completed?

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Because it is incomplete and I still haven't wrote chapters I've had planned for a while now.
I haven't fully planned out each chapter but I will have a chapter for each of the mane six
and a non-clop interlude chapter with the CMC. I haven't thought of anything else.
Thus far I've already planned out the chapter with Rainbow, Twilight, Pinkie, the CMC,
and have a vague idea of what I plan for Applejack and Rarity.

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Well, get crackin'! :pinkiehappy:

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Soooooooo...
Is it dead now?

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