Rainbow Dash, a royal maid, is mourning the death of her dear herbalist friend, Fluttershy. Little does she know that Fluttershy has chosen Rainbow to fulfill her last request. She wants Rainbow to kill her coltfriend.
(a/n Title was previously 'My Best Friend Died so I'm Killing Her Boyfriend')
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jfc how did the like to dislike ratIO GET WORSE??? fml lmao
please don't let that discourage you. its pretty good in my book, and it even have proper grammer. I'm one of the people that likes your plot of this story. i love how you put your personality to this and clueless dash is great.
here are some of my questions about this story
how is rainbow dash going to kill mr. shady guy?
does fluttershy really hates him or she's so obessive over him that she wants to be with him even after death?
and finally what about pinkie's granmother, can she comfirm about the pies being related to the apples?
sorry if i'm asking too much
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Yay! Thank you for liking my story! It really means a lot to me ^w^
For the first question, Rainbow will have several attempts but eventually she'll find the perfect time when {REDACTED} she'll strike with {REDACTED} but then {REDACTED} so in short; she {REDACTED}
Next question, the answer is incredibly simple. it's not {REDACTED} and she is {REDACTED} so it's all {REDACTED} fault for her {REDACTED}
Lastly, yes.
Feel free to ask anything you'd like, but this being a mystery and all quite a lot of information will be well.. redacted. Sorry bout that ^w^
Man, double the number of dislikes to likes. Let me rectify that.
Think
What's with so many dislikes?
Rainbow Dash, not Rainbow dash. You capitalize both halves parts of the name. Think of it like a first name and last name. For example: Bob Barker. Also Applebloom is all one word.
Otherwise, why does this have so many downvotes and no comments?
I'm fine with Rainbow Dash being a little dumb, but I wish you made her better at fighting.
Oh, dear, I think I may have figured out why Fluttershy wants Spirit Wind dead, and I really hope I'm wrong.
Anyways, I'll refrain from upvoting or downvoting until this is complete.
It lives! Don't worry, it looks good so far. I really want to see how this turns out