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Twilight Sparkle always enjoyed those quiet days in Ponyville when those 'crazy ponies' weren't always driving her crazy every single day. Unfortunately for Twilight, this day isn't going to be one of those days!

When a royal servant from Canterlot and a knightly pony prince all happen to come to Ponyville, everything is not exactly all fun and games. Twilight Sparkle and her friends must not only deal with these newcomers, but also the trouble that seems to be following them as well.

Can Twilight help keep the peace in Ponyville? Or will disaster strike at Ponyville and spread to Canterlot itself?

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For various illustrations on this story and the next few stories I'll be writing, please visit my DeviantArt page here:
http://lionel23.deviantart.com/gallery/33762051

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Comments ( 28 )

I really liked this story, keep up the good writing :pinkiehappy:

63415

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Was hoping to get at least one comment :twilightsheepish:

Possible to get a eta on the next update? :)

83389

Hey! I was planning this weekend but got into a car accident Christmas morning >< Got out of hospital and injured my knees and wrist, so a SLIGHT delay on the next update XD

88479 Ouch! Hope you are okay :) Looking forward to the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Found on DA had to track it here. Hope ya heal up quick!

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Thanks I'm getting better now, I should have the next bit (maybe the whole story) done by this weekend, check out my DA page for illustrations on this story ^^

221980 Nice, was just thinking about this story! Im looking forward to it :pinkiehappy:

Heh, was going through DA and found this again. The art for later chapters is ganna drive me crazy you know that?

63415 Thank you, just uploaded new chapters and cleaned up the beginning ones, so give it a read again ^^

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That was the intention! ^^ New chapters upload, just got to finish the last chapter or two and this concludes Knight's Tale (part 1), which is mainly an intro story and setup for the next part of the story when stuff gets real! ^^

222996

Updated, new segments up! Sorry it took me awhile to get around to posting an update, thanks for the support!

Sitting in class listening to a history lesson about the EU. I'll just check my mail. Hmm lionel23 replied to your comment, "le click"
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"What's this? You have one too?" ROFL, oh Rarity.

Hmm. Very interesting read :twilightsmile: Although, your deviantArt page pictures kinda gives the game away about what's going to happen :moustache:...still, I look forward to reading the rest of this when you add more chapters :pinkiehappy:

Sooo.....when are you adding more chapters? :fluttercry:

Is Angel Song's voice similar to Whitney Houston's or someone else? Because Whitney has one of the most beautiful soprono voices in the world.

Is it just me... or is Chapter 7 missing? o.o

Is this Fanfic dead/chanceled?

Please don't give up on the story. I really like the Equestria you've created here. Your world building is most excellent

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Its there, just mistitled as chapter 8 on the listing.

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The eighth and final chapter is up on the author's DA page, he just hasn't posted it here yet

From posts on his DA "A Knight's Tale" is the first story in a nine story series, summararies of which are in this DA journal and has lots of worldbuilding art in his DA gallery.

Is it me or does Rarity seem a bit too... aggressive here? :duck:

"Shush," Rarity politely barked back at him, silencing him as if she were a dominatrix.

That has to be the worst metaphor ever! :raritydespair:

I'm glad at least that Rarity is working to bring Knight Light and Angel Song together. I thought she was going to be a jerk and be the pony standing between them. That would be very out of character for her.

This was a very good action sequence. You got Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and even Fluttershy fighting off the Warponies the way they know best. Yeah, Fluttershy! :yay: I love it when Fluttershy gets aggressive! :flutterrage: I see the final chapter is on your DeviantArt. I hope it gets posted here eventually. I prefer to read fanfictions here. But this is too good a story to miss so I will finish it up there. Keep up the good work.

an great chapter my fellow author, but one thing is bugging me, where are the Royal Guards? I don't care if you think they are useless in a fight, I don't think that Caption Armor would have is units stand by if there was a brawl involving the mane six, or any civilian for that matter.

Comment posted by Out of Place deleted Aug 9th, 2015
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