Magic has progressed to the point where it is now possible to generate an illusionary world indistinguishable from reality.
In this second world Rainbow Dash has the opportunity to live out her dream of becoming a true hero.
Constructive criticism is encouraged.
Directly inspired by the Sword Art Online light novel series but will contain many differences (it will also be less dark than the original). The story should be fully accessible to those who have never heard of Sword Art Online or played a video game.
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I feel like the writing could use a bit of work, but on the whole this looks pretty good. As a newbie Sword Art Online fan, I'll be watching this...
So was Twilight a beta tester or did she just read the manual?
...No, it's both, isn't it?
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"I feel like the writing could use a bit of work" specifically?
And she just read the manual, there's no beta in this story.
You didn't explain enough give us more plz