Twilight has always loved graphs and charts, they could be relied on to be factual and not swayed by emotions. Now that Twilight has become an Alicorn one of her most important graphs needs to be updated.
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I'm 100% lost on what exactly happened in all this. Just it involved Twilight, and a bunch of stuff that made no sense past her tussle with her wings.
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Twilight, when faced with the prospect of immortality (or so long lived it might as well be), started trying to organize her thoughts to lessen the impact of eventually losing everyone she cared about. This led her to consider her sister-in-law who is also an immortal, and how it would be better for both of them to be married so they do not suffer loss of close relationships such as lovers. Then she decided to cause Shining and Cadence to divorce, for their own sanity
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would you mind covering your last sentence or two with a spoiler bar.
Did Twilight forget Cadance might be straight. Shining might not be stupid.
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Twilight is in her "I couldn't give any fuck whatsoever about anything rational at the moment" mood. Ala Lesson Zero.
So probably. Or again she just doesn't give a fuck about anything that is legal or sane.
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She thinks what she's doing is in everyone's best interest, when in reality its twisted and immoral. Even if she means well.
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done
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Thanks
Dark tag wouldn’t be inaccurate
Now all you need is a new story with Cadance finding the same thing when updating her shipping graph. Then them both trying to get the same outcome (Shining Armor falling for Rarity, and each-other falling for the other) but countering the others plans.
Maybe have it turn out the Flurry Heart came from a night that Cadance got Twilight drunk.
Anyway, like the story. So Twilight. Wish her best of luck. Only a little sad it is not Rainbow Dash that she wants.
There are worse hobbies I suppose.
Jyggalag would be proud.
The only thing I don't like about this story is that it's a thought piece. It presents a story idea and makes for a great first chapter but doesn't continue to put the thought to action.
It makes for a great one off too but my complaint is that there isn't more which is a good complaint to get I'm told.
An interesting idea, but a bit indigestible. Those huge paragraphs should probably be chopped up, and combed through by a proofreader.
It's pretty decent despite that, though. With some editing, this could be a neat little piece.