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Makerofthebuttswagger


I don't follow people. I have friends. Social Security number listed below.... you thought.

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This is my first story. Friendly advice concerning plots is welcome.

Joey Steffen has a good life. A girlfriend, lots of friends, loving parents, a cat.... you know, the good stuff. Then, after a series of rather unfortunate events, he finds himself in a strange world. Why? Beats him. Maybe something to do with being persecuted by his own country, as the U.S.A. starts a radical purge of the Christian faith. Getting separated from his parents, things don't look so good.

Then a strange visitor meets him in his dreams, and he finds himself somewhere completely new.

This land holds creatures that would make any sane teenager like Joey bonkers. Of course it would be that way, being stuck in a land of magical ponies for an unknown reason. Rated T for language, suicide references, and slight comedic nudity.

Gents... I have ownership rights from @Broncoman18 to use his character, Joey Steffen, for this story. If you don't believe me, ask him.

Chapters (11)
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Well could be worse he could of crapped himself before he left

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The wall of deleted coments doesn't encourage me to read this story.

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Like I told Time Waster, I was arguing with someone and it looked really tacky. By all means, don't feel obliged to read it if you don't want to

I like it so far! Keep up the good work!

Oh man if Luna and celestia are talking about ww2 then they just made a good
Horrible mistake

Dup dup dup dup dup
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Its from a song I was listening too while I was reading your story

Watch that human prophecy be a scroll that just loops markipler saying you're a looser over and over

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Or just calling me something weird like butt candy

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Or wade "saying what am I supposed to do suck some Coco to get better cards" favorite uno moment

Ok quick question, what caused people to hate Christians? Also whos the dominate religion?

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I dunno, really. I chose Christians because they are the most persecuted religion as of today

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Kind of a creative thing. I might explain later in the story if I get a brainwave.

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Well its got my fave and u got a follower.

A interrestin setting so far!

Good work btw.

Maybe something to do with being persecuted by his own country, as the U.S.A. starts a radical purge of the Christian faith.

>70% of the U.S. is Christian.
>wait

Love this story already

Amazing chapter plus it looks like cadance didn't want him to leave

I think it might of been better if it was a noble that was trying to use joey as some sort of status thing. Like saying I got this and you don't nanan boo boo type deal

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