• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
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Inconsistent story writer with too many half-baked and outdated ideas.


Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie find each other in the midst of a raging storm. Through the rain, wind, lightning, and whatever else a storm can throw at a pony, they just might find something new in the process.

Based off of the song "The Lightning Strike" by Snow Patrol.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 46 )

I need to read more of this! :D


I'll try to have the next chapter up by the end of the week. No promises though, since my work ethic is awful. :P

>Read chapter one
>Go to read another story
>Chapter two is posted


So much d'awww :heart:


Thanks, and good timing on your part. :P

The awesomeness.

The awesomeness is everywhere.

d'aww level = d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

d'aww level = d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

This place needs a "this was absolutely glorious" emoticon. Although I would probably break the emoticon limit.
This was fantastic, l'artiste.


Oh, stop it, you. You're making me blush. :P

Really though, that means a lot. *hugs*

No homo.


Yeah, that's probably better. *brohug*

Awesome story, full of emotions and stuff ^^ :heart:
I really like your style, pls write more :3


Thanks, and I do plan on writing more. I'm just not sure what it is yet. :P

Well you could write about them telling everybody there together.


Oh, no, this one's definitely complete. That kind of thing is too overdone in a short-and-sweet ship like this one anyway. :P

I meant other stories.

Agreed. I prefer these short love stories, too. :heart:
You could try some other romances, I dunno what you love to write most but there are no limits - write whatever you want^^.
You could write a TwiXOctavia, I've never seen one of those before :D


Not sure about that one. :P

I'll think about it.


That's what I was going for, so I'm glad to see that I made it cute enough.:pinkiehappy:

That was great. Could I also have hugs, with possible homo?

a'www you're so sweet. *homo-hugs-back*

The settings are descriptive. Situations are romantic & time tested. One could not argue against that. :pinkiesmile:


Thanks for the feedback, and double thanks for liking it! :P

That was very well written. And way too cute. :yay:

my brain is full of d awwwwwwww! well done!:yay:


:twilightblush: You're too kind.

One of the best Pinkieshy's stories out there. They are so in character and all the relationship is very sweet and vanilla. What you would expect from ponies actually, and that is good. :yay:
Following you from now on.

ITS SO FREAKING CUTE AND ALL THAT... That story burst my heart with the shear adorableness of it all, it was amazing and I think my heart exploded twice :heart:


Yay for cuteness overload!

This fic was manific! :heart: :pinkiehappy::yay:

this was epic, really cute adn hearthwarming! :yay::heart::pinkiehappy:

My new favorite Pinkieshy. This was awesome! It was cute and was written perfectly:pinkiehappy::heart::yay:



this was really great and written very professionally.

That was a beautiful, heart-warming story. I can't really understand why this ship seems to be so rare. I always got the impression that there was a bit more than just kindness and friendship between those two, since Fluttershy always proved to be patient with Pinkie and Pinkie seemed to slow a down, at least a bit. Pinkie even seemed to get rather protective over Fluttershy. Hm.

Anyway. Your story left me with a content smile.

Thank you.

The amount of d'awww moments in this chapter was almost enough to give one diabetes! Thankfully, I actually live in a house with two people that have Type 1 diabetes, so I would've been set!

King of Kings epitaph: Why you got to kill me with the excess of feels man?
In all seriousness, this story was a well thought out story, with just the right amount of backstory provided in it, and just the right amount of adorable moments between Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie and these adorable moments between the two make the reader feel just enough of the emotion known as


to keep them interested in the book until the end, which then delivers another set of d'awww moments to the reader.

The cuteness is so good I love this shipping and your story keep it up man

Awesome story ! :pinkiesmile::heart:

Sorry, Im sooo late but this story is so beautiful, and is one of my favorite Flutterpie fics. Nicely Done:pinkiehappy::yay:

Sorry I'm late but I just have to comment :twilightblush:

So, I was browsing some flutterpie fics then I saw this one synopsis and I was like "Hm, this seems pretty good, maybe I should read it...", then I see on what it's based, and I was like "Wait, based on Lightning Strike, one of my favorites song, really? I'M GONNA READ IT RIGHT NOW AND I'll BE LISTENING THE SONG THE WHOLE TIME :pinkiecrazy:"

Wait, no one mentioned the song in the comments, srsly? :fluttershysad:

Sweet and really well written fic, fine work. :moustache:

I read the first chapter when it came out, but never knew there was more until just recently. It's super nostalgic to come back to this after so long, and to such a sweet story no less.

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