Fluttertoes

MThis Li'l Pinkie . . .
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Slice of Life
Porn
Pinkie invites you over to her place for a party, but she has some . . . ulterior motives.
Sex
Fetish
Profanity
Second Person
Human
Pinkie Pie (EqG)
Anon
True Edge · 5.5k words · 29 13 · 3.2k views

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Locky

Locky #1 · Oct 26th, 2018 · · ·

Only criticism I have is that it was way too short, tbh

True Edge

True Edge #2 · Oct 26th, 2018 · · ·

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Well, thanks for that, then. I might do a sequel at some point, but I’ll have to be in the right frame of mind.

Locky

Locky #3 · Oct 26th, 2018 · · ·

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Sure, the best clop is always written when horny af

It also wouldn't hurt to have some more meat on the story too, some more character interaction, maybe a couple dialogs here or there.
The clop scene in itself is well described and rather hot, if a little short, but it's always better to have some buildup leading to the porn, and then an epilogue that can't be simply resumed as 'you came and you fell asleep', especially since the story (and its description, while I'm at it) revolves around you 'needing it'.

True Edge

True Edge #4 · Oct 26th, 2018 · · ·

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I know, I know. This is what comes of it, when I write something at five in the morning, right after I got up. Hell, at this rate I might do a rewrite on this, as well, at some later date.

daba zaba

daba zaba #5 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · ·

Thar was really good though too short.
Definitely needs more build up and dialogue but it is really good definlty need more foot storys.

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #6 · Oct 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

>Stayed for the flutterfeet
>Faved for the footjob

Despite the "bad writing", you still managed to get the job done with this foot fetish fic even if it was a bit short. :P

Sir Starshine

Sir Starshine #7 · Nov 2nd, 2018 · 1 · ·

I've always been neutral towards footplay, but this was fantastic! I really love how you portrayed Fluttershy, a shy girl who still knows what she's doing and doesn't hesitate to please.