What makes you think the princesses aren't the only ones who were getting rutted by Spike?

This is amusing, hope Spike can marry all of them.

Lol it will be funny for sure when he finds out he knocked up Dash. And by now the princesses are for sure knocked up. I can't wait for Spike to talk to the girls about what he is and him figuring out and coming to terms with it. I mean he might not be okay with it right off the back. It is like finding out you were born and bred to be a fuck toy for someone. You never had the chance to be anything else. I think having the girls talk to him not as a fuck toy but as a person would be something to help him, even more so if Dash talk to him and let him know he is going to be a father, he is going to have a family now. I think once it gets out I hope HOPE it doesn't rush from there but we get to see him spend time with each girl he is involved with, go on a date or just spend time with them so we get to see how they interact and how close they are before we get to a clop with each girl. I think it would be fun to see him be the first for each CMC now that he knows what he is. It could be their first heat and the only one they could think of spending it with is Spike. But he ends up ruining them for anyone else lol.

I plead with you tho to PLEASE keep Cand out of this. She is married with a child and putting in NTR and/or Cucking will just ruin this story for me. Hell have Spike start to hook up with every maid and female guard in the castle before that happen just please avoid that. I like this story too much to have it turn my stomach with Cand showing up. Let Spike be a good guy and not involved with married or taken ponies please.

Judging by what Luna had written in her note (and Spike's mention of Rarity sucking on his toes), this story seems like it'll be going to uncomfortable places in terms of fetishes.

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I think that would depend on what you find uncomfortable in terms of fetishes. Either way if you're fine with these chapters then you will probably fine with what comes next.

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Probably should let you know that this isn't plan to be a very long one but it is plan to be the first in a series

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Depends on what they are. I kinda mostly skipped the clop scene cause the first half is kinda disgusting.

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You do know I been putting warnings about what is it this right?

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I get that. But it would be nice to see one shots or something in this universe with a chapter for each girl, showing off his relationship with them and than a clop for them. Idk I just think seeing the dynamic between him and each girl would be super interesting since it seem surprisingly Dash has the biggest connection or at least the strongest feelings for him. And I didn't see Rarity having a foot fetish coming at all, well with her being the one to do the worshiping that is. She seem like the type to enjoy having someone do that to her, Dash SUPER seem like the type to do that since we know she has SUPER sensitive hoofs. Shy of course would be into some S&M bonadage thing with some slave pay, didn't see the yaoi thing tho lol. It could be that her and Discord have more fun than we knew originally lol.

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The hoof/foot thing and the yaoi thing are old fandom jokes, as to the rest you will have to wait till this one is done and see for yourself

Do you still need an editor? Because I'm available.

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Do you have any references?

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At this point. Can you really be picky. Any editor will help.

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I'm the editor for The BabsXHuman Clop Saga, An Assistant Tailor and A Handyman At Equestria and Don't judge a book by its cover, to name a few.

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Its just a stander question

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Message me and we will talk about it

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Hmm. Its just you really could use an editor. But ok.