I like it so far but you neeeeeeeeeeeed an editor or proof reader

I'd be willing to do both if you can't find one

I stopped reading this story. Where is it going? Why is this talking about a story where a Queen steals some kids and no one cares for it?

Fuck, why am I learning?

i.redd.it/t4cg3h7v43001.jpg

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This is just the set up

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If you are serious then send me a message and we can talk about it, however you may want to wait till the next chapter to see where this is going. The fetish tag is there for a reason

9249592
You don't like a "story" where the juvenile janitor of the show is a breeding specimen (somehow) in amateur fiction? A stud that (apparently) now acts on Court orders?

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He age up in this

Yes, Yes she does.

The premise has my interest, but as others have said, you need to proof read before posting. Read the story out loud to hear what it sounds like for one thing. Most lines don't even end with periods. That's just a lazy oversight.

I like where this is going, but realistically speaking if spike would realize that he was modificated to be a sex toy I would expect him to be devastated, betrayed and furious. (Granted giving him two penises would decrease his outrage but my point still remains)

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Well it not like the pony who did it is still around or for that matter did it to him. He came about from dragons it was done to, besides he has a personal connection with the pony who did it