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Applefai


I'm a Christian brony born in 10/19/1996, profile pic done by sweetstrokesstudios.. I may write M rated stories I take commissions $10 for first chapter and $5 for additional chapters

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Due to a possibly fatal accident Twilight has had to promote Starlight to headmare to keep an eye on her patient.

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"Don't worry headmare Twilight, I'll be fine, what's the worse that can happen?" Gallus said unfazed by the date (dare) and bolted out the door to perform the dare tasked to him.

Twilight was brought back to the present by Spike's voice. He told her that school went nicely as usual and that the students has missed her as headmare and are ....(so)... concerned about Gallus that the (they ) made him a get well collage.

Yeah, that's the thing. I have trouble believing that Twilight is so broken up:facehoof: but Dash apparently feels nothing :rainbowderp:

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Yeah I might edit it, just need to let the guy know. But who says Dash feels nothing? Some people express grief in different ways

This feels a little unrealistic, I’d think that Twilight would visit him at the end of every day, not completely give up all her responsibilities because of one mishap that wasn’t entirely her fault.

Either way, it’s pretty good.

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