Remember this pony? She's Valley Glamour, and she appears on Fake It 'Til You Make It.
Well, in this short story, Jimmy Hook is going to turn into this Pegasus. Follow him as he spends a nice time.
Commission for my good friend JimmyHook19.
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9251505
That's awesome!
First Valley Glamour TG TF Story EVAR!!! <3
9251553
That's right!
9251553
Nice to see you here!
This is an immediate red flag.
Red flag numero dos, considering that he established that he knows aboutRrarity.
If rather un-subtle.
9251637
What do you think about the rest of the story?
9251653
Short, but good. Nice plot twist at the end, there.
9251779
Well, I thought saying "short story" on the description would tell it's short. Maybe if I did put "trust me, the story is short", it would be easier to understand?
Without nothing else, glad you like the story.
9251555
yep <3
9251582
Thanks X3
He didn't take a nap, he took some nap
That was fast... didn't think the character was that memorable (especially since I don't even remember that character being a thing)
Wut
Sorry, had some fails. I'm gonna reply, Zapper.
9252325
I don't get it. Is it wrong?
Well, she was canon. And Jimmy remembers the characters.
What is it? Maybe you want to know how Rarity got there?
9252329
You know you can edit your comments/replies right? (It's the pencil icon in the corner) ^
9252338
I know, sorry for that.
9252337
1. Yes it is wrong, it should say that Jimmy took a nap
2. That is one dedicated fan
3. That is one reason. Another is how did Jimmy get there, how did rarity know Jimmy was there, and who is this character that she's so important one of the Elements of Harmony had to go get her? (I also want to know what happened to Jimmy when he got to earth (mainly about his memories))
9252349
Oh you haven't seen nothing yet Zapper! I got a HUGE list of favorite characters from MLP! :D
9252350
Meh can't really complain about that, I'm the same exact way with pokemon
9252353
Heh... here's the list btw: https://www.deviantart.com/jimmyhook19202122/favourites/76756600/All-of-my-favorite-characters-from-MLP-in-stamps
Just so you know, that list will continue to increase, and soon........ I will reach 1,000 favorite characters from MLP! <3 :D
9252349
1. Fixed! Thanks. I asked because I didn't understand the way you said it.
2. Indeed. You can ask him.
3. Let me tell you: Jimmy is a human. He's from Earth. The story is about him becoming a pony. As for Rarity, she got worried when a customer of her boutique disappeared, and maybe she got info that Jimmy was in another dimension, so she traveled there thanks to the mirror at Twilight's castle.
9252353
Heh, that's cool.
9252357
Wow... I would never be able to do that with pokemon, especially since I had a hard time just making a top 10
9252360
Well I was confused, the way you worded it you made it seem like Jimmy was originally from equestria and somehow got sent to earth
9252370
Heh. my list used to start out at 10 when I first got into MLP, but then I wanted to go far beyond any MLP Fan and have the most amount of favorite characters possible! :D
9252404
Well, ya definitely succeeded...
9252379
Oh, don't worry. That can happen.
9252410
yep <3 X3
9252416
Well that's all I could find to nitpick on, look forward for your next story to
nitpickread.9252420
Wow...
I should call you "The Nitpicker".
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Zapper just got roasted!!!!
Fun read and in the end that is all that I really want.
9252494
Wow, thanks for the comment, the fave and the follow!
9252503
No problem, reading something noice is a lovely way to kick off my day.
9252508
Heh, that's nice.
9252430
9252440
Meh, I've been called worse
9252592
Heh, your loss though, because I am Awesome <3
9252600
Umm, ok?
9252604
Heh. X3
9252604
Nah, don't worry about names.
But seriously, you could say more things on the comments, not just looking for errors.
9252614
Hmmmm...
surenah!9252638
Then why do you read my stories?
9252643
...they're good stories, duh
Haha!
9252664
Well, that's a nice answer.
This was, like, a good short story.