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RebelNarrator45


"Everything in the world is either coffee or not coffee."

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We all know they're there.

We live with them.

But what if these seemingly inconspicuous creatures are actually something far more than that?

Something we would absolutely never suspect?

This is the tale of The Spies Among Us...


Note: This is a one shot, written for the hay of it...but should be taken very, very seriously...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

The description and premise alone make me think of Perry the Platypus’s spy organisation from Phineas and Ferb.

Edit, now that I’ve read it, it really does remind me of that. Only thing missing is one Dr Hoofensmirtz.
Good read.

Brilliantly original comedy!
:pinkiehappy:

Gummy, well, he's a G ...
:facehoof:

Nice job!

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Well, that, or Apple Bloom telling the rest of the Crusaders "I know what we're going to do today."

Or Spike trying to bust the Crusaders when they try to do something potentially dangerous.

I guess Philomenia (sp?) and/or Tiberius/Tibbles (Luna's pet possum from the comics) would probably be in charge of the organization.

Not much I can say beyond great job on the action and humor in this short, but enjoyable one-shot.

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:pinkiegasp:Oh no he did not!!!
:applejackconfused:Ah think he did...
:raritydespair:Does he not realise what he has done?!
:rainbowderp:Ohhhh...this won't end well.
:fluttershysad:Um...I don't think...um...he should have said that...
:facehoof:Writer, you've gone and done it now!!!
:moustache:Ha! This is gonna be good! Get him, Rainbowfan45!



Me: *deep breath* WHAT did you just say?


:rainbowderp:Pretty sure he said he hates cats....



Me: *Canterlot voice* HOW DARE YOU?! HOW....DARE....YOU?!!! YOU INSULTED CATS EVERYWHERE, AND I WILL ARISE AND FIGHT FOR THEIR HONOR!!! PREPARE TO BE ENDED!!!!!!

*draws virtual sword*

YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!!!!

CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRGE!!!!!!!!!!!

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Oh, you....!

Grrrr!!!!

Well, no matter. I will catch up to you sooner or later, Zapper frost. And when I do, nothing will save you from the full power of my wrath.

Nothing.

Do you hear me???

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*you got mail*
Dear Rainbowfan45,

PUPPY LOVE FOREVER :pinkiecrazy:

Love,
- ZF

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Oh that does it!!!

Zapper frost, you and I are now mortal enemies!!!!

(Not that I have anything against puppies, cause they are super cute, but I'm more of a cat person myself...but puppies are pretty cute....)

BUT YOU INSULTED CATS EVERYWHERE!!! I SHALL NEVER FORGET THAT, ZAPPER FROST!!! NEVERRRR!!!!



(One day...you will regret it. This I Pinkie Promise you....:ajbemused:)

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Well then, be prepared to break a pinkie promise

(Cats r st00pid)

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:pinkiegasp::flutterrage::twilightangry2::ajbemused::rainbowdetermined2::raritydespair:

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!

*throws a Twilight Tantrum*

I am plotting revenge of epic proportions....

Believe me. I am.:pinkiecrazy:

(You will not escape.....)

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Gonna have ta find me first

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Ahem. Yes...well...

Details! Details! Ugh! :facehoof:

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