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Reflectance

This short story follows Galaxy Star, a unicorn who became Twilight's student, but not before undergoing various hardships. Short prequel story to my audio drama series Remembrance

Critique is fine but please be gentle. This story is very personal to me.

Chapters (2)

Comments ( 4 )

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DrawLight

DrawLight #1 · Oct 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1 ·

A really nice beginning of the story. Wishing to see more

ChristtonMash

ChristtonMash #2 · Dec 11th, 2018 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I think my heart just broke...

ChristtonMash

ChristtonMash #3 · Dec 12th, 2018 · · · Chapter 2 ·

This is really good. A lot better than I could ever do when it comes to emotional stories. I'd like to see where this goes!

Script Nova

Script Nova #4 · Apr 18th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

It was very lovely, even though it did have me think about my college years. I am a bit sad there's not more for the story since I very much enjoyed doing a audio recording on it. It was hard to do, but I think I did ok doing it. I love this OC you made so much... I will miss her as soon as Remembrance ends, things can't last forever though it can be kept in our hearts. Don't know what you'll have in store, but though I know you'll do it in music form :3 if you do end up just writing, I'll be ready for whatever it might be.